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While you were away

Bindu Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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While you were away

I walked sensuous night’s lonely corners
Ice fingers wrapped around my soul
I played alone in dark’s mystique fabric
Keeping me awake on moon’s silent songs
Friendly rains beat their midnight rhythm
While crickets heard my secret wants
Trees rustled their wet green moves
Showering me little broken thoughts
I whispered them my need for you
Raging silent at Venus’s hearth
Winging me to love’s lonely despair
Losing myself in this distance from you…

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  1. Date: 4/4/2014 4:22:00 AM

    Worthy to be read endlessly. I WOULD LOVE TO COLLABO SOME PIECE WITH YOU. LOL somebody gonna die hahahahhaha

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 4/7/2014 3:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I would love for us to do a collab too, lets do it sometime. hugs to you, dear friend.
  1. Date: 2/19/2014 11:57:00 PM

    Another very imaginative write. You place vivid images in the minds of the readers.

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 2:24:00 PM

    Very nice poem!Enjoyed the read.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 1/29/2014 5:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Kash! Its good to see you back.
  1. Date: 1/21/2014 1:49:00 AM

    Yes its right, losing myself in this distance.... awesome!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 1/21/2014 3:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Ahsan. I'm glad you liked this poem.
  1. Date: 1/21/2014 12:16:00 AM

    Ok, forget this distance stuff. I'm taking you to a movie or something fun, because I concur with what Richard said. "Crickets heard my secret wants"..."raging silent", a visceral need to fulfill your silent wants. Hell yeah!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 1/21/2014 7:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're the 1st lady to say "I only watch horror". That says so much. lol To me horror is like Bambi. Just sayin'.... =D
    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 1/21/2014 3:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sure then, movies, but I watch only horror:) Thank you for stopping by, its lovely to have your comments.
  1. Date: 1/20/2014 4:15:00 PM

    In every line, in every word, I can feel your longing for a lost love. This is a very heartbreaking, yet beautiful write, Bindu. Another amazing poem from you! This would be a great entry for the "Love and Loss" contest...Thank you very much for the kind comments. Hugs! :)

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 1/20/2014 9:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Kelly! Hugs!
  1. Date: 1/20/2014 8:40:00 AM

    BINDU.......this is mystically magical......Lovely, Yes....you do have such a way with words........I agree with Richard! Lovely, my sweet.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 1/20/2014 9:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Eileen. its always nice to have you stop by.
  1. Date: 1/20/2014 6:55:00 AM

    so haunting in its very raw, stark tone, but also with a touch of melancholy,bindu.. you always shine, ever uniquely.. huggs

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 1/20/2014 9:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the lovely comment, dear Nette! Hope you are having a lovely week. hugs
  1. Date: 1/20/2014 6:55:00 AM

    Wow, he is a fool if he does not rush to your hearts desire. This is such a treat to read a new piece from you. You have such a way with words, I get swept up in your words.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 1/20/2014 9:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What a cool comment, you just made my day, Richard, thank you:)
  1. Date: 1/20/2014 2:51:00 AM

    - A lovely poem, Bindu - Have a great new week. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan Date: 1/20/2014 9:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Anne-Lise. Hope you have a wonderful week too. hugs.