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  1. Date: 3/7/2014 10:35:00 PM
    wanted to tell you how I liked the way you did the title on this one too, Jag. I had not noticed the first time that you only had moved the "s."

  1. Date: 2/3/2014 8:34:00 AM
    "To exist on cravings of the wayside That was simple enough like a sudden death, or perhaps like a random gift or a colossal shift of moorings." I like this bit; its very interesting.

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 11:34:00 AM
    This a great poem. You have expressed it very well. It is always the little peopls that lose. We need big changes. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 11:23:00 AM
    This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 6:44:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poem SJ, your work is very thoughtful and exceptional. Congrats on your win in this contest! Best wishes...

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 12:54:00 AM
    I like this S.J - the imagery you've used of a drunkard waiting for pay day showcases the eager anticipation we wait for news of a better world only to be disappointed when the new world changes back into the old one. Well written!

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 8:53:00 PM
    a good one, Jag. Congrats on the winners' list.

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 9:11:00 AM
    Enjoyed the poem for In the faraway contest and congrats on the win, Nair