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The Inside Girl

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Below is the poem entitled The Inside Girl which was written by poet Debbie Guzzi. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Inside Girl

plinks like the mallet on my xylophone
watch the rain fall, hear the sound 
splatter in the puddles

just licking the damp from the window pane
tears fall, there'll be no outside
wet cheeks and runny nose


Contest: Through My Window
Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/17/14

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  1. Date: 5/27/2014 7:39:00 AM
    I think this one girl just found something to do on this rainy day - write... Well-done with with the muse of the rain. Congrats.

  1. Date: 5/26/2014 7:00:00 AM
    This is a great Kimo. The contrast between PLINKS LIKE THE MALLET and JUST LICKING THE DAMP though they made me a bit uneasy yet they mingled so well together the marriage between the two stanzas made this wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 5/19/2014 4:03:00 PM
    There's been so many inside girls throughout History. Fine poem for them all, James :)

  1. Date: 5/3/2014 9:53:00 PM
    Debbie This is a poem full of emotion and feeling. I could feel the sadness of your desire to go outside but can't. Thank you for the nice comment on my Poetry poem.

  1. Date: 5/1/2014 2:43:00 PM
    What a blessing! This is such an enjoyable, beautifully written and captivating read. Thank you so much for the share. You are indeed hugely talented

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 1:30:00 AM
    Thats one cozy poem. Too real; I can hear your silent moments, from here. Thanks for your company, Debbie

  1. Date: 2/19/2014 1:55:00 PM
    Awww someone has a cold?? :) A very relatable beauty you have here Deb ;)

  1. Date: 2/18/2014 7:11:00 PM
    Nice portrait of soggy day. Were you talking about a little kid? Thanks fro your kind words. KI guess you live in a rural area or a small town, Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 10:00:00 AM
    It is raining hard now, and the sky is grey from cover to cover. What a great time to read this poem! Some enrapturing moments you have here. I quite like it.

  1. Date: 2/3/2014 7:26:00 AM
    Oh we do have the Blues today! remember this Debbie,,,it is far better to give than receive...and you give us all countless joy day upon day with your poetry....long may it last..... love the first one the imagery is amazing...

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 2:52:00 AM
    Rated 7 Such a brief but clear and perfect KIMO painting such an intense and moving picture while reading en enjoying... the multiple- layered sound of your xylophone is definitively deafening... (earplugs not an option ;-) ) That's how your poem landed overhere... ;-) And of course: hugest congrats.. LOL Dutch greetings. Elly

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 5:55:00 PM
    Dear Debbie I can hear the rain falling in your heart! You, my dear, are a poetic princess! 7 my best, chuck

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 10:01:00 PM
    Just lovely Debbie and congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 4:48:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 11:38:00 AM
    thoroughly enjoyable and very descriptive. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 8:07:00 AM
    Beautiful interpretation ands congratulations on the win, Debbie

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 9:55:00 PM
    soupmail.

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 12:45:00 PM
    Nice observation, my lovely friend, worded in a very nice poem. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 11:46:00 AM
    Sure have felt this way before.... Sighs.... Btw this little monkey, got intrigued with your crown sonnet Debbie, but and BIG but, I'm kinda busy And I'm meter deaf, never really wrote good sonnets or near it methinks, just swung by to say hi...i know i am not on the list, not really sure if i can join or not? I am fickle minded after all... Off to sleep i go.

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 11:19:00 AM
    Wishing you well in the contest. enjoyed your poem.

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