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THROUGH MY WINDOW

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THROUGH MY WINDOW

          moonlight shadow staring in the night
                        Adonis is standing
                   with three flowers in hands.

              serenading the woman of his life
             true love that blooms in two hearts       
                happened through my window.









Entry for Nette Onclaud's "Through My window" Poetry Contest
AiyaH Darkest D.
Jan.17,2014

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  1. Date: 1/21/2014 12:57:00 AM
    This was very touching for sure. Ah, the simple pleasures of telling one how they feel. Wonderful job.

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 11:34:00 AM
    Very well written my friend on a lost form of romance.

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/20/2014 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you,my ever supportive friend, Mike :)).. have a great weekdays!! *__*
  1. Date: 1/18/2014 9:41:00 AM
    beautifully crafted excellent piece

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/18/2014 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for a delight ful comment my friend liam.. ;'))
  1. Date: 1/18/2014 8:52:00 AM
    Lovely and creative write, AiyaH

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/18/2014 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hint: ..this is my love story...happened 12 years ago...it's a culture in our country...but sad, it's not being practiced now.. :)) ..i think Nette can relate with this,we called it.. "HARANA".. :))
    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/18/2014 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Dr. Ram!! ..i'm glad you appreciate it!! ;-))
  1. Date: 1/18/2014 6:48:00 AM
    - A really lovely poem,AiyaH ! - (I thought it was my computer that there was something wrong with yesterday - by mistake   was my last poem deleted ... posted it over again today.) - Have a enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/18/2014 7:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh..Anne..Thank you !!! ..i experienced the same,too...i've almost took about 8 hours trying to open our link...thank God its OK now... :-)) hope you have a great weekend as well.. *__*
  1. Date: 1/17/2014 7:55:00 PM
    Nice poem

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/18/2014 7:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you,Mohammad :-))