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You know he's the one

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You know he's the one

Breaths by one who shelters fear,
That whisper given to your ear.

The hand you hold with shaken sound,
The arms that cradle you on the ground. 

As fearful tear runs down your cheek,
He wipes them away, your heart to seek.

And with a gentle kiss, replies,
You my love have beautiful eyes.

You blush in return and meet his gaze,
Forgetting all the horrible days.

Heart now pounding out your chest,
You know he's the one, he's the best.

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  1. Date: 1/28/2014 12:39:00 PM
    Nice way to express your feelings in rhyming couplets. Just remove the "a" in "shealters".

    Bennett Avatar Alexis Bennett
    Date: 1/29/2014 8:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ok. Thanks Robert. I missed that one. Lol. :-)
  1. Date: 1/23/2014 6:41:00 PM
    It is a very good couplet poem. I am giving you a 7. G.

    Bennett Avatar Alexis Bennett
    Date: 1/29/2014 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Giorgio.
  1. Date: 1/21/2014 7:50:00 AM
    it IS the heart that knows----my "one", my love, "Dutch", finds his way to me in my thoughts, and memories. Thank you for stirring my memory bank, Alexis!

    Bennett Avatar Alexis Bennett
    Date: 1/29/2014 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so much for your comments. :-)
  1. Date: 1/20/2014 3:25:00 PM
    And lucky are those who find their 'one'.... You've put Beautiful thoughts in your poem, I agree, it's the heart that would know...

    Bennett Avatar Alexis Bennett
    Date: 1/29/2014 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your words Kayne. I'm glad you liked it. :-)
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 4:38:00 AM
    Beautifully penned Alexis!

    Bennett Avatar Alexis Bennett
    Date: 1/19/2014 7:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sarai. I enjoy reading your poems. And your comments!
  1. Date: 1/18/2014 12:00:00 PM
    your poem discribes the warm comforting sanctuary of love....thank you for visiting my post...Frederic

    Bennett Avatar Alexis Bennett
    Date: 1/18/2014 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And thank you for your kind words.
  1. Date: 1/18/2014 11:41:00 AM
    A place, perhaps lucky one is there. Excellent poem expressing beautiful heartfelt words of own. Loved always, my poet friend, bl

    Bennett Avatar Alexis Bennett
    Date: 1/18/2014 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much bl. I'm glad you liked it.
  1. Date: 1/17/2014 9:14:00 AM
    He's The One.... __where in Earth we can find that one??__..he he.. nice poem, Alexis!!! ,,keep penning :))

    Bennett Avatar Alexis Bennett
    Date: 1/17/2014 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. You too.
    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/17/2014 3:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ask him..lol!! :o)) have a great weekend to us!! :))
    Bennett Avatar Alexis Bennett
    Date: 1/17/2014 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Haha. Thanks AiyaH. I think I've found him though...maybe he has another brother I don't know about! Lol. ;-)