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MAMA YOU ARE LOVED

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MAMA YOU ARE LOVED

So many times, I see your door locked.
I hear you singing a song of love.
I know,Mama...you are grieving.
I wish I could pick all the stars in heaven,
Put the flower in your hair....
then braid them to make you prettier.
I wanna buy you a diamond ring.
If you'll allow me,I will travel far.
To search for a man your heart deeply desires.
I will tell the wind to guide you when I'm gone.
And the moon shines above you in the night.
May the sun keeps you warmth in your coldest life.
I will tell the birds to sing in the sky.
And I assure you of happiness,
I long to see in your face.
Mama...it's been twelve years now.
Too many years have passed,
I hope you let the memories cast.
You deserve to be happy,
Too many times you'd drowned in mud.
Patiently, I know you kept your mouth shut.
But deep inside those eyes....
I can see the darkness behind.
Why Mama?Why do you have to suffer that much?
Is it because you love us,
You can sacrifice living in hell.
You don't deserve it! This is insane!
I've grown up now, Mom...
Look at the daughter you'd once cradled.
It's a high time to again pick up the pieces.
Mama...it's not yet too late.
Stand up! I'll take your hand in a bliss.
I'll send you someone to wipe away those tears.
Look at the man patiently waiting,
He is not the same guy who brought you pain.
And one thing I want you to remember...
Mama...you are loved....
From the day that I came.




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  1. Date: 2/11/2014 7:21:00 AM
    Totally emotional and wonderful poem. Congrats on the big win.

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 2/17/2014 7:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much mydear, Archana...your visit is so matter to me!!!! ...i'll visit your page some time...
  1. Date: 2/9/2014 6:42:00 AM
    Wonderful piece of a poem, congrats on the win, AiyaH

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 2/10/2014 1:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, Dr. Ram..!!! >__<
  1. Date: 2/9/2014 6:18:00 AM
    Wow Aiyah this a beautiful....Well deserved first place.......!!!!

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 2/10/2014 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, Herzel!!! >__<
  1. Date: 2/8/2014 9:31:00 AM
    This is a beautiful poem and I love it Aiyah! hugs

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 2/8/2014 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Gautami.. :0)
  1. Date: 2/8/2014 4:55:00 AM
    Aiyah: Congratulations on your great performance and participation in my contest "Impress me III". G.

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 2/8/2014 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Giorgio...my dear.. I don't know how to express how thankful I am...Thank You so MucH!!!!!!
  1. Date: 2/8/2014 2:45:00 AM
    LOVE your poem. > 7 Congrats on this BIG win Dutch greetings Elly

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 2/8/2014 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Elly...Thank you so mucH!!!!
  1. Date: 2/8/2014 12:18:00 AM
    beautiful tribute to your mum congrats on win hugs

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 2/8/2014 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much my dear..!!!! :)))
  1. Date: 2/7/2014 8:21:00 PM
    I knew you could do it Aiyah in the winning circle with this fine poem congratulations my friend. :-)

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 2/8/2014 9:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    my dear Mike... thank you for supporting me all through out...:0))
  1. Date: 2/7/2014 8:05:00 PM
    Thanks for that dedication. Heartfelt... Verlena

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 2/8/2014 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Verlena :)) huggs!!!
  1. Date: 2/7/2014 7:22:00 PM
    Winner List: Impress me III! (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio V. are   posted and I will: Congratulate you with your winning poem, AiyaH !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 2/8/2014 9:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you, Anne-lise...with all my heart!!! ..you guyz ..from Linda,Vie, Nette, Giorgio, Chuck,Mike ,Jim....and most of all my dear poets here..you are all my inspiration why I made it!!! ..THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! ^__^
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 4:43:00 PM
    such a powerful poem, I love how you uplift both mom and daughter . Truly inspiring to kids that can relate

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/20/2014 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you,KIra!!! .. ;))
  1. Date: 1/18/2014 6:09:00 AM
    This is my favourite. Sad but yet full of hope. Well done

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/18/2014 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Ronald!!! ..i appreciate your comment :))) good day to you*__*
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 9:23:00 PM
    gosh, you really love your mama. This is wonderfully heartfelt.

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/17/2014 7:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    my dear ,Andrea.. the ever beautiful...i ode this poem to "me"...i was thinking of writing a poem for myself,but instead i made it like somebody is writing that for me.. :)) thank you so mucH!!! ..*__*
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 8:31:00 PM
    Heartfelt and sad. Good poem, Aiyah! 7 G

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/17/2014 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Giorgio V..it's an honor to have your comment in my poem :)) thanks a lot!!! *__*
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 6:48:00 PM
    Wow my friend a heart touching and tear jerking writing my friend. As poet destroyer said you hit the 10 mark with this. Please dry the pen and keep up this great work you have been doing here recently. Your friend Michael

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/17/2014 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Michael...your comment build a big confidence in me...you know it!!! ..;))thank you so much!!! *__*
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 6:08:00 PM
    Wow. That is so thoughtfully written. I wish I had that type of relationship with my mom.

    Bennett Avatar Alexis Bennett
    Date: 1/17/2014 7:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh my goodness. You portrayed yourself so objectively. It makes me like the poem more.
    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/17/2014 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Alexis...thank you for visiting my inked world.. :)) ..the "mom" here is actually.. "me"!!! ..*__*
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 6:00:00 PM
    There is a whole lot of meaning and emotion here in this poem. Instead of tears on your pillow, there must have been tears on your pen which dripped down from your eyes. You could even make a movie out of this and wit a Tony or an Oscar. Great job. How long have you been writing? Jim Horn

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/17/2014 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you, James for this..speechless...i don't know what to say.....i never had any formal education about poetry..even i never took any college degree...i just started writing last November 2013 when i joined here...and that's the start of my journey on writing...THAnk you!!! :))
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 5:36:00 PM
    Wow, this hit my heart pretty good. A Broken D., very deep. It's as if you know how many times I've drowned in mud... Wow... No one deserves this... Amazing, a perfect 10... Adding this to my favorite poem list.... Linda

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/16/2014 5:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    that's a secret!.. drowning in a mud...i'll share to you if you STAY!!! ...*__*but too late..I think i came in a wrong time...but you're leaving now.. :((
    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/16/2014 5:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh.. Linda!!! thank you ..:)))
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 3:44:00 PM
    I liked this. Look for my emails.

    de Torres Avatar Aiyah de Torres
    Date: 1/16/2014 5:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you, Jim!!! ...you're a gift sent to me by angels..you know it!!! :))