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This Is Truly Paradise

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This Is Truly Paradise



From our very first words I knew we were bound to love A special spark undefined A simple phrase that says Now this is different You are special Someone I've been waiting for A walking talking dream Am I hallucinating Are you real I feel your warm lips on mine Your soft tender skin... It is too perfect to be real But the sweet smell of you Cannot be mistaken It is real, you are here As we walk hand in hand Down a moonlit path The whole world stands still For this is truly paradise This is heaven on high I am truly yours my darling Truly yours! © Jack Ellison 2014

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  1. Date: 1/17/2014 2:34:00 AM

    Wow, another beautiful, romantic write from you!! This reads perfect, and its great to know you are so happy, Jack:) There really is nothing to beat being in love, is there:) love and hugs!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 1/17/2014 5:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    As you can see in my response to Rebecca, she was responsible for suggesting I write a narrative! I thank her and I thank you for such sweet words of love! I am very happy to now call you one of my dear PS friends, Bindu! Warm hugs... Jack XOX
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 9:33:00 AM

    This is such a beautiful love poem, Jack! Wow, I love seeing this side of you :)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 1/17/2014 5:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    If you find beauty here, it is inspired by you, my dearest Rebecca! Without your encouragement, I would never have attempted a narrative! Thank you my sweet friend... love ya! Hugs,Jack XOX
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 8:02:00 AM

    Lovely!... Knew Mike was my true love immediately! When my pizza landed on my lap on the first date it didn't bother him. He let me ambush him at his math class daily. He made me laugh and his Trolls loved my Dragon! Yep! LOVE at first sight! Couldn't ask for more! Well! Maybe more room for all the pets around my feet daily! Dragon crowds them out when he naps curled at my feet. But Hubby is building my cats a perch. Isn't that sweet! He's still loveable. Even after all these years! Winning!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 1/17/2014 5:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My dear sweet Carol, loved your account of how you and Mike met and fell in love! Sounds like a match that just had to be... yee haw for youse guys! LOve and big smoochy hugs, Jack XOXOX