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Pain

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Below is the poem entitled Pain which was written by poet Shadow Hamilton. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Pain

Lie back, relax, do not fight me
no, do not scream or even cry
it will be over soon you will see
now open wide, no, no much wider

Trembling, she did as she was told
feeling him close leaning over her
aching from being forced to open so wide
wishing with all her might that it was done

Hold still now, I will done in a minute
as he leaned over her tugging so hard
at last it gave up its grip and popped out
the awful tooth that had caused such pain

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  1. Date: 1/17/2014 6:11:00 PM
    Owweeee Shadow lol. Very cute

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 1/17/2014 6:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol ty FJ Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 1/15/2014 9:10:00 PM
    Yeowch! I hate having to go to the dentist, I've had my share of tooth aches and pains to know why she wanted that tooth out! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening my friend! What a glorious piece, such a fantastic poem! Great Work!!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 1/17/2014 6:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Russell it is the worse pain of all I think ty for your comments Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 1/15/2014 7:42:00 PM
    Owww!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 1/15/2014 7:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol hug