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  1. Date: 1/14/2014 3:18:00 PM
    Great write Gail..the second line of the last stanza was very powerful.. love

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 2:58:00 PM
    sadness and anger here Gail a strong emotional write that is exquisite Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 6:58:00 AM
    So glad this is not fact. You are love and light. A biting cold permeates the words here. Creative and well written,

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 9:34:00 AM
    Glad it's not personal!! Because wow that has sting!! lol I love it Gail; more poignant to many than they may even realize at the moment....and to many who already do. Wonderful Gail Angel :)

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    Date: 1/14/2014 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    FJ ..although it might not apply in this poem, do you think that the "gold lines of forgiveness" can sometimes be applied to unblock a bad situation..
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 7:07:00 PM
    Wow, what a deeply dark write my friend! So unlike your usual carefree and positive and loving and hope filled poems you usually write! That doesn't mean that I don't like it, because I do love this poem! I surely loved reading this spectacular piece! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 7:06:00 PM
    So very sad ..sweetie I hope this is purely fictional and not heartache you are experiencing....Well written though Gail Luv,Deb