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raindrops dance


raindrops dance

The falling
raindrops dance, a
bearing wall
retains his memories
of years before,
constructing
solitude, invite his
soul
and form continuum,
above to soar.

Reminding paragon
among beach plum,
intently they
behold, when words
indite,
a skyward calling
are the raindrops'
thrum,
the mirroring of
stares and souls'
invite.

And as the raindrops
dance around and
jump
belike she comes,
'mid silences aboard
foreshadowing the
rainfall drops that
thump,
their night defines
again the winds'
accord.

Her grandness in the
mistle's waving
forms
a solemn cause
became of diamond
storms.

© 06-15-2013, G.
Venetopoulos, All
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  1. Date: 8/5/2014 7:27:00 AM
    A very good sonnet. The imagery in it is quite nice. 1 thing would make it better though. Stop starting your lines with the word "and" that word is empty of imagery plus there are much better words to replace it. Otherwise a very nice sonnet.

  1. Date: 3/7/2014 8:38:00 AM
    A very creative and awesome poem friend Giorgio. Thanks for your soupmail. I read it just now. :) Have a nice day ;) hugs from the land of smile (^_____^)

  1. Date: 2/2/2014 10:20:00 AM
    wow.. STUNNING write my dear friend Giorgio,.. beautiful dance :) like your fabulous write so much :) Sk

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 11:15:00 PM
    what a sweet dance this is. the raindrops' thrum. That is a YUM line!!

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 3:03:00 PM
    Wonderful, this is amazing. Very well expressed

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/26/2014 1:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you CG! G.
  1. Date: 1/21/2014 8:28:00 AM
    G! Oh dear - don' let this comment be misunderstood but would I like to walk with you in the rain... poetically spoken of course Happy Dutch Greetings, Elly

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/22/2014 12:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Elly! :) G.
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 11:28:00 AM
    Giorgio, you captivate captivation, excel excellence and mesmerize magnificence! Poet's poet! My best, chuck

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/20/2014 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Chuck!
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 8:41:00 AM
    A lovely sonnet , Giorgio ..... Enjoyed stopping by :)) Loved the topic and beautifully described ! :)))) Love, Saanvi :)

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/20/2014 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Saanvi! Thank you!
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 4:42:00 AM
    What a fine sonnet, Giorgio! My favorite lines are.."their night defines again the winds' accord. Her grandness in the mistle's waving forms a solemn cause became of diamond storms." There's definitely something in your poems that mesmerizes everyone!! gautami

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/22/2014 12:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Gautami! G.
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 2:40:00 AM
    This sonnet is just breath taking in its beauty Giorgio. It is going into my favorites.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/20/2014 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Connie! Thank you!
  1. Date: 1/17/2014 6:02:00 PM
    superb sonnet Giorgio lovely is the picture painted by your words Shadow x smile hug

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/20/2014 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Shadow! Thank you.
  1. Date: 1/15/2014 1:42:00 PM
    This is grand and finely crafted. Loved every line and rhyme. Great work! Those last two lines are gold. Always, Laura

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/20/2014 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Laura! Your poems are grand, too!
  1. Date: 1/13/2014 5:17:00 PM
    Hi Giorgio, A most charming write with excellent melodic flow. Ken

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/20/2014 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey, Ken! Thank you!
  1. Date: 1/13/2014 8:47:00 AM
    Such imagery as the raindrops drop down all the beauty and mystery they bring with it - I never tried a sonnet but I like the feel of this one especially what finally happens which is so beautiful. thanks, jeanne

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/13/2014 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jeanne. I'll pass by to read your work soon.
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 4:04:00 PM
    beautiful flow. Thanks - great contest : )

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/13/2014 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Jack! Thanks!
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 3:25:00 AM
    I really wish I could write sonnets...just the way you do..Captivating my mind and inviting my soul to read more- Excellent!Charm

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/12/2014 6:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Charm: I am sure that you can write sonnets. It needs practice and patience.
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 12:31:00 AM
    Hi Giorgio, stopping by this one again... I had a long day... Sidney, finally took off.. Gees... I think I want a baby now... LOL, JK... Nate, and I are fine the way we are.... Well, I guess babies are okay, when they belong to someone else.... lololololololol......... See you around... Linda

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 1/12/2014 2:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Linda! Thank you!
  1. Date: 1/11/2014 7:19:00 PM
    Well, well, what a storm. A perfect sonnet poem... ~from SKAT & LINDA~