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  1. Date: 8/5/2014 7:27:00 AM
    A very good sonnet. The imagery in it is quite nice. 1 thing would make it better though. Stop starting your lines with the word "and" that word is empty of imagery plus there are much better words to replace it. Otherwise a very nice sonnet.

  1. Date: 3/7/2014 8:38:00 AM
    A very creative and awesome poem friend Giorgio. Thanks for your soupmail. I read it just now. :) Have a nice day ;) hugs from the land of smile (^_____^)

  1. Date: 2/2/2014 10:20:00 AM
    wow.. STUNNING write my dear friend Giorgio,.. beautiful dance :) like your fabulous write so much :) Sk

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 11:15:00 PM
    what a sweet dance this is. the raindrops' thrum. That is a YUM line!!

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 3:03:00 PM
    Wonderful, this is amazing. Very well expressed

  1. Date: 1/21/2014 8:28:00 AM
    G! Oh dear - don' let this comment be misunderstood but would I like to walk with you in the rain... poetically spoken of course Happy Dutch Greetings, Elly

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 11:28:00 AM
    Giorgio, you captivate captivation, excel excellence and mesmerize magnificence! Poet's poet! My best, chuck

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 8:41:00 AM
    A lovely sonnet , Giorgio ..... Enjoyed stopping by :)) Loved the topic and beautifully described ! :)))) Love, Saanvi :)

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 4:42:00 AM
    What a fine sonnet, Giorgio! My favorite lines are.."their night defines again the winds' accord. Her grandness in the mistle's waving forms a solemn cause became of diamond storms." There's definitely something in your poems that mesmerizes everyone!! gautami

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 2:40:00 AM
    This sonnet is just breath taking in its beauty Giorgio. It is going into my favorites.

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 6:02:00 PM
    superb sonnet Giorgio lovely is the picture painted by your words Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 9:35:00 PM
    A fantastic write, that makes for a beautiful read. You remain a champion of verse.

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 1:42:00 PM
    This is grand and finely crafted. Loved every line and rhyme. Great work! Those last two lines are gold. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 5:17:00 PM
    Hi Giorgio, A most charming write with excellent melodic flow. Ken

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 8:47:00 AM
    Such imagery as the raindrops drop down all the beauty and mystery they bring with it - I never tried a sonnet but I like the feel of this one especially what finally happens which is so beautiful. thanks, jeanne

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 4:04:00 PM
    beautiful flow. Thanks - great contest : )

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 3:25:00 AM
    I really wish I could write sonnets...just the way you do..Captivating my mind and inviting my soul to read more- Excellent!Charm

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 12:31:00 AM
    Hi Giorgio, stopping by this one again... I had a long day... Sidney, finally took off.. Gees... I think I want a baby now... LOL, JK... Nate, and I are fine the way we are.... Well, I guess babies are okay, when they belong to someone else.... lololololololol......... See you around... Linda

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 7:19:00 PM
    Well, well, what a storm. A perfect sonnet poem... ~from SKAT & LINDA~