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BACK AT ONE



While granules from past season’s flakes thaw the impatience of my own caprice amidst the restlessness of mid-winter, clay gathers new fragrance of tangy moss. Back at one, infant stars bequeath light upon clouds resting on a drape of reverie, the music of firstborn days stirring the wake of garnet’s ardour with time’s new dial--- a little fiery perhaps---as opposed to the acrid taste of a cycle’s old debris. My January, you cuddle the balm of my fortitude in your arms streaked with breathing hope, to nurse the fertile seeds of renewal with ovules so despicably beautiful that moonlit fireworks glaze steadily on night’s eyes, grounding my balance with acceptance that trials and love come from same flame: how this moment must be relished in praise of fresh dowry… Call me home instead and warm my skin as I roam with you, my January, fulfilling my quest’s return to a patient self... the kind which blesses fire and ice.
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Hello January Contest by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 1/22/2014 8:28:00 AM
    "the kind which blesses fire and ice".. Splendid writing! Congratulations nette on all your wins, you deserve! hugs and smiles...

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 2:31:00 AM
    I liked your expressions. Congrats on the win, nette.

  1. Date: 1/21/2014 8:18:00 AM
    Enjoyed your expressions on January and congrats on the win, nette

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 2:15:00 PM
    - Hello January, contest is judged / / Sponsored by: Vicky Tsiluma - Congratulations on your winning poem,Nette. - Nice to take part - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 1:46:00 PM
    "a cycle's old debris".........wow......I loved that line depicting what has gone before. Excellent work here!! Well done, dear Nette!

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 11:11:00 AM
    Wow, Nette! I absolutely LOVE this. Your picturesque description of your own emotions painted through the nature. Eloquently written. Enjoyed greatly!

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 10:09:00 AM
    Beautifully done Nette! I have no words to express your brilliance. Just beautiful!

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 10:15:00 AM
    A rhapsody of faith and hope - something new from nette? LOVe, daver

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 10:22:00 PM
    Wow really beautiful Nette. Well done!

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 5:15:00 PM
    BTW, someone told me your birthday was like the 8th?? Is that true? So sorry if it was and I missed it, Nette. A belated Happy Birthday to you. It must make you a Capricorn!

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 5:14:00 PM
    gosh you made January seem so wonderful, Nette. I can't stand that month and I have no idea how to do this challenge. Anyway, VERY nicely done!!! I am sure this will do well in the contest.

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 2:40:00 PM
    A mosaic of magnificence, Nette! Hugs, chuck

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 4:24:00 PM
    A very beautiful poem welcoming the new month my dear friend Nette. If this is a contest, a winner for sure. Thank u so much for sharing. By the way, I'm sorry, I just came at soup now. Just finished our 2day Sports Day. Belated Happy B-day again. Got a poem for u, to be posted soon. Hope u'r doing well. Me, quite sad;((. I'll be back soon. I've to go back to bed. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 4:21:00 PM
    Beautiful poem Nette, I would not be surprised if this was a winner...peter

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 2:06:00 PM
    Your January has a deep, reflective feel, like clearing the weeds and building a strong strand of hope at the end. Take a bow for delivering an excellent, fully-lit piece!

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 12:35:00 PM
    "The fertile seeds of renewal with ovules so despicably beautiful"...astounding lines. Riveting emotion & impact on the eyes & soul. Not really a big surprise, though, coming from you. True story. ;-)

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 10:11:00 AM
    Reads like a January winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..The Male Mockingbird is ruling the over the feed trough this morning..He won't let any other bird near..Sara

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 9:28:00 AM
    You are a force of nature Nette!

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 7:11:00 AM
    a poem of love and beauty Nette well written Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 6:56:00 AM
    Brilliant work, Nette, a pleasure to read. I loved the last stanza especially. What an idea, to romance and roam with January this way:) I should remember to live like this more!!

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