Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 1/23/2014 10:06:00 AM
    Yasmin, your words are of true delight, and I am happy every time I make time just to read your poems. Just make sure you find my spirit through this journey lol... I'm just teasing... Awesome write... Linda

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 1:13:00 AM
    Beautiful introspective write and congrats on the win, Yasmin

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 10:24:00 PM
    Beautiful poem, Yasmin. Deep imagery, amazing choice of words. Emotions ran perfectly through this work. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 12:44:00 AM
    Happy New Year

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 12:11:00 AM
    fantastic imagery, i love it.

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 11:53:00 AM
    A beautiful poem that I enjoyed reading, Thanks for the visit to my page. I might just have to quit writing. I can not see good anymore. I just got out of the hospital again yesterday. This time it was breathing problems. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 12:41:00 PM
    Supreme spiritual wisdom you bestow my lovely Yasmin. Your ship shall never sink. Such a rich picture you paint with our language, And such nuanced word choice that appears so right and effortless from you. I love how the enormity of the ocean daunts you not. Now I have the joy of looking up new words in my tattered dictionary, something I relish much. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 8:51:00 AM
    great piece..the water theme enhanced the wishes

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 3:51:00 AM
    That was an amazing ride, what an ending. Great work. Best of luck with the competition.

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 9:17:00 AM
    - Yasmin my friend .... so deep, touching and beautifully written! - Wish you luck in the contest - regardless, it has already won in my eyes. - Thank you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 8:06:00 AM
    Wow, what an incredible entry into Nette's contest my friend! I am surely impressed by the superior word play you used throughout this illustrious poem Yasmin! I really enjoyed reading this majestic piece here this morning! Great Work!!