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Smeagol's beatles, Norwegian wood

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Smeagol's beatles, Norwegian wood

I once had a ring, or should I say, it once had me... 
it made me vanish, isn't it good, my precious ring? 

it asked me to wear it and make way to its masters cave, 
So it drove me mad and its my precious for me to crave, 

I lived in a cave, biding my time, eating like swine,
We dwelled until time and then bagginses came, took what was mine.

They took me to Mordor and burned me, So I started to talk. 
I told them I didn't and spoke off to Orcs, shire is the path 

And when I awoke, I was alone, Frodo had flown 
So he left from shire, isn't it good, my precious will be mine.

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  1. Date: 1/8/2014 5:09:00 AM
    - I hope you do not think: "I lived in a cave, biding my time, like eating swine" in Norway .... lol - Pleased to read your work Ravi. - Happy New Year!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    kiran Avatar ravi kiran
    Date: 1/8/2014 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No I haven't thought about that... Thanks, Happy new year to you too