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  1. Date: 1/17/2014 8:12:00 AM
    flawless in its iilting reflection, sis.. every line a distinct voice.. sweet congrats on your win in my contest, cyn... how's the flu?.. huggs

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 2:16:00 PM
    just SO beautiful....... what else can I say? Congrats Elly

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 8:46:00 AM
    Dear Cyndi - You've done it again, brung (is that a word or just an ugly thing?) the indescribable to the page. So many times I've wanted to be devoured by the horizon; and feel the glow of its mirage. "Twilight has begun to slowly roam the horizon" You bring your soul to the paper along with this willing admirer. I am so happy you are here, Cyndi. Tell me again your little girl's name. I hope you're not still sick love, Kathy

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 7:18:00 AM
    Loved the enjambment of the word [wanting, ] hanging there, a space/tab might work stronger, just in that 1 place-& [bewitching dwindled] How about Rapture for the title? [yes please little Sis use my haiku!] Light & Love

    MacMillan Avatar Cyndi MacMillan
    Date: 1/10/2014 8:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :D The untitled is intentional, Sis. 1) The poem is, in essence, about failing to capture what I see into words. A loss of words. 2) So many paintings at the gallery in Port Elgin (where this beach is situated) were untitled. I wanted to mimic that, visual art, since that is what I saw in that sunset.
  1. Date: 1/8/2014 9:04:00 AM
    Beautiful poem, Cyndi, warming my soul on a cold winter day. hugs, Catie :)