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  1. Date: 1/22/2014 9:30:00 AM
    Wonderful! and so true we write in such hieroglyphics that no one else would be able to decipher what we scribble,, and anywhere on the page, any empty space.. That itself can be called some work of art :) But alas most will go into oblivion! Loved this David! hugs...

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 10:14:00 AM
    Ahhh Muse...the conceptual Angel scattering inspiration seeds. I really enjoyed "Sometimes", David, My Best, chuck

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 8:23:00 AM
    Excellent realization about writing poems of different forms. Sense prevails faster than the words. Nice job done, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 8:03:00 AM
    Regards this verse, yes it becomes a process, but I have found getting away from the keyboard and having mini adventures encourages the flow to move faster! //Poetry Quarterly has a call out for submissions David, I am now in 4 of this publishers venues, Dual Coast, haiku journal, & the Inwood Indiana Review, YOU try all of these too. [Thanks for the nice comment on Westward Movement - yes I sprinkled it with rhyme to punctuate?] Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 7:42:00 AM
    excellent and oh so true David well done Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 7:18:00 AM
    Very expressive work about how one writes a poem ...Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 11:16:00 PM
    Relatable poem, David. Sometimes composing is a struggle, but once in a while.... wa la. Your name means "beloved," same as my dad. : )

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 10:57:00 PM
    This are the steps which a good poet follows.But i never follow any rule while write and directly write the poem on the soup's page.I loved what you say through your lovely piece....well penned

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 7:24:00 PM
    Nicely Written David, I liked the ending, and the beginning too.....Roger

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 12:24:00 AM
    Hopefully more than just once in a while. With you I'd say it's more than half the time!! But I'd like to see even MORE poetry from you, my friend. Good one on the Muse!!!

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 12:33:00 PM
    I think everyone here can totally relate to this...well done David

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 11:10:00 AM
    Feedback is always welcome. Thanks. Oh my! So true and so well said. This should reach any writer.

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 9:24:00 AM
    let your pen speak your mind! made a collaboration of realities when thinking of what's best poem to write.. :)) ..once again.YOU hit the target! ..^_* ...awe job!!!!

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 7:46:00 PM
    my muse likes to talk to me when i cannot listen (as in when driving) but then to come home and remember and write the words and piece it together is exactly as you describe...pssst...i think you hit the target! Good one :)

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 6:04:00 PM
    Its once in a while.that I reach my target..that I can relate to..and to every word written.Excellent"!!

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 5:32:00 PM
    Great write David, that just about sums up what writing is. well done....Peter

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 2:07:00 PM
    Very true write David. It sums up so much of the creative process for myself. Also had a great flow. Take care!

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 7:24:00 AM
    ohh, the sudden rush of images that simpy has to bleed on the parchment... such an ' in the moment' write.. love it, david.. huggs

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 6:33:00 AM
    I love it when that sometimes happens where we come up with that ideal write, one that expresses exactly what you are trying to say, one that isn't ridiculous or crazy, or worse yet incoherent! I really enjoyed reading your amazing poem here this morning! What a stupendous piece, what a lovely poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 5:27:00 AM
    :) Very very sweet description of the writing process. You sure reached your target with this one, David. I really enjoyed it! :) I like how the lines are seamless and flow...I haven't been able to do that yet...Just a questions...third stanza...last meant that as from....or should it be form??? Just double checking.

    Williams Avatar David Williams
    Date: 1/7/2014 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Eileen I did actually mean "from" but I like your idea of form better, have changed it big thanks for that…David