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Beautiful day

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Beautiful day

Beautiful Life.

Sometimes my life’s so beautiful
‘My heart begins to weep
When life it just seeps into me
So very, very deep.
As life sends out her message
With the sound of falling rain
There’s nothing seems to matter
The mystic’s back again

I feel just like a squirrel
On a sunny morn in spring
And I don’t know why it happens
But it’s like a kind of dream.
The rain goes clitter, clatter
As it beats that old tin can
The sky be like a curtain
As the rain comes tumbling down.

I’m having them more often now
These kind of mystic days
Today the rain is falling
And it kind of feels okay.
I’m caught within the mystic
As the rain plays merrily 
All logic’s gone to roaming
I just sit here being me.

7 January 2014 @ 0917hrs. 

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  1. Date: 3/8/2014 4:29:00 PM
    Hi Peter, I'm here for my beautiful day my friend, gentle words from a kind heart. Your life is beautiful because you are the same. You give of yourself to peopkle and you ask nothing in return. I would say one thing to you Peter, you just keep beeing you. You keep putting down those writes that open our hearts to the joys of life. You my friend can tame the savage beast. Long may your words flow Peter. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your friend always....MIKE.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 3/8/2014 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your words are super kind Michael, and words can't say how much I appreciate them. Thank you so very much.....Peter
  1. Date: 1/8/2014 10:22:00 AM
    superb Peter you know how to live Shadow x smile hug

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/8/2014 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you shadow, I believe that we are two of a kind with our love for nature. I appreciate your kind comments....peter
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 6:36:00 PM
    What a beautiful write my dear you are a happy little chappy, you seem to love everything life hands out to you, it s a shame more people are not like you. Luv........Ve.....

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/8/2014 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thank you for your comments, my love. You and life are the reasons for my happiness...And I appreciate everything about you....peterxxxxx
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 6:05:00 PM
    Beaytufyl wrote Peter my friend. I can feel the appreciation and positive vibe so well. I've had days like that too. An overwhelming feeling od well being and contentment. well dine. thanks for the feel good factor it's left me in. take care Pete. I amended my poem to include Australia too with the weather. stay safe mate.Pete.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/8/2014 3:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Pete. when you get moments like this, my friend cherish them and they will become more and more. I appreciate your kind comments...Peter
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 5:16:00 PM
    Wonderful melting of nature and human emotions within one another my freind within this write, i enjoyed it twice because i read it thus. cheri

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/8/2014 3:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Cherri, I love it when people get something out of my words. This is the joy of writing. I appreciate all your kind words, my friend....peter
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 2:15:00 PM
    the rain can be a wonderful muse...nicely penned ....best wishes

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/7/2014 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Joseph....peter
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 5:06:00 AM
    Rain does have that effect on me too, Peter. Lovely write....So full of feeling and joy.....Loved it

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/7/2014 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Eileen, I appreciate your kind comments...peter
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 1:21:00 AM
    Nice ballade -a classic write, Peter.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/7/2014 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Doc....peter
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 12:41:00 AM
    Beautiful lines - "im caught within the mystic, logic gone roaming":) this sure must be an awesome day, Peter!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/7/2014 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Bindu, your comments inspire me to try and make my poems more beautiful. Every day is beautiful. That's just how I feel these days. I appreciate your kindness, My friend....Peter
  1. Date: 1/6/2014 8:17:00 PM
    another very enjoyable read from you, peter! thank you...

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/7/2014 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Ilene, as ever you are so very kind with your comments....peter