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I want to love you

Charmaine Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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I want to love you

I want to feel you like a petal feels the wind I want to touch you like dewdrops touch my skin I want to hold you like moon shadows hold a star I want to tickle you like the flutter of a butterfly tickles my heart, from fields afar I want to lay my head upon your lap like a child lays his head upon the lap of a sterile mother in her fertile dream I want to miss you like an immigrant misses his homeland the land which deceived his opportunities yet embraced his first footstep and held his last tear in a stream I want to think of you ,ardently I want to seek for you,,secretly In the same way those paramour's enchanting eyes seek and wander for his flamboyant mistress I want to live,dying to have you like a hero dies in battle thinking of his daughter's last smile and family pictures. I want to find you in the same way my faith finds God Without seeing,without knowing with all doubts,questions and mysteries With all that I am,and ever will be I want to love you .

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 2:43:00 PM

    Well written dear...You know that we are searching to our inner " I " , The " I " is our soul who is innocent , intelligent , wise . And wants to mix with super soul ( The Almighty )...It's the object of poetic life....Best wishes dear sister from India...Keep it up with universal love...Thank you very much for your great thoughts...

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/13/2014 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnks for your comment ..ever soooo kind
    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/13/2014 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No I' m not a sister from.India..I wouldnt mind it if I was : )
  1. Date: 3/6/2014 9:35:00 AM

    Lovely poem . I want to love you like you , only you.....Thank you very much dear...Best wishes from India .

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 8:46:00 AM

    nice one

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 8:45:00 AM

    Absolutely amazing All I can say Randy

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 8:43:00 AM

    Absolutely amazing!! All I can say. Randy

  1. Date: 2/3/2014 11:49:00 AM

    This poem is beautiful.

  1. Date: 2/3/2014 1:58:00 AM

    So glad I came across this poem.Its absolutely beautiful.

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 5:47:00 PM

    Thanks for reminding me to check for new poems. Thanks for the fave, too. I'll make it up to you on this one since I like it so much. So many different things that are alive and well penned.

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 1:03:00 AM

    A soft innocent touch along with romance.. nice one!

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 5:02:00 PM

    Every man wants a woman to want him in that way. (Well, most men, anyways.) And who am I to keep you from having what you want ... so, go ahead ... love me that way ;-) Beautiful words, expressing a beautiful thought. Thanks for sharing. Joe

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 2:39:00 AM

    Very affecting poem, good work - Alisher

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 8:42:00 PM

    touching beautiful glows a deep warmth of love a glowing treasured piece

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 5:37:00 PM

    A very passionate write Charmaine, it takes love to new heights, thank you for you're visit my page, it's always a pleasure to hear from you xxx

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 10:49:00 AM

    Good grief, what desire! Wonderful.

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 4:27:00 PM

    Dear Charmaine, we all want to be loved. When people cannot find love, they are disheartened and become depressed, even vengeful toward those who are happy. Such a lovely poem. I will send you a Soup Mail, but I am only on here once in a while. It would be best to communicate via regular email. Love to you and your baby! You must be so happy now. God bless you! Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 9:48:00 AM

    Who is it you want to love? Is it romantic love? Or love of G-d? Thought provoking work here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 9:16:00 AM

    That is a love worthy of seeking. Beautiful!

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 2:48:00 AM

    It's beautiful, sentimental, serious and in a deep way sad. Lovely poem, Charm, and thank you very much for it. G.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 1/10/2014 2:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congrats on your membership! Welcome to the Premium member team! :) G.
  1. Date: 1/9/2014 10:02:00 PM

    This made me smile. Among the many analogies it made me question what each of those feelings in each of those moments would feel like. Thank you. :) Admirably, ~ Sam

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 6:51:00 PM

    wow that's one big wish list! I'm not sure anyone could do all that? lovely, lovely thoughts! Light & Love [and thanks so much for liking my verse]

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 4:14:00 PM

    Beautiful poem, Charmaine. Romantic in its deep expression, amazing use of imagery to convey sensual honesty. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 7:09:00 AM

    Charama, beautiful is this piece; happy she is in her fertile dreams ;) So lovely.

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 1:29:00 AM

    very nice

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 10:25:00 PM

    Congratulations on your premium membership!! : D

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 10:05:00 PM

    7 Stars shine on this gorgeous rendition of love! Charmaine, your pen is admired! chuck

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 8:06:00 PM

    WoW! Love this Charma.Wish you a very very Happy New Year.

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 5:22:00 PM

    A profoundly romantic poem that no heart could ever remain unmoved! Tenderly beautiful writing , dear Charmaine!

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 10:46:00 AM

    Ok, I'll make it easy for you, I DO. The line, when faith meets God, untouchable!!! Thanks for the visit, Charmaine. I will return shortly.

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 8:04:00 AM

    Charma, I love your words....

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 6:02:00 AM

    Very passionate beautiful love poem Charmaine. Loved it : )