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a feral creature called ''love''

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a feral creature called ''love''

crushed, wrecked, and shook 
like a ceramic doll I fall 

headlong and deep, deep 
into the violent stream 

of fear--fear that flows, flows
like a hurried river 

into the tributaries of my 
fearful heart which 

trembles and quakes at the 
watery inundations of its 

rippled waves; flooded 
and overflowed with 

fears and unmoved by 
promises that deceive 

with a caress I take refuge 
and secret repose 

in a thing more wild, in a 
thing more bloodthirsty,--

a feral creature called "love,"
whose kiss is a fatal bite!




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  1. Date: 3/1/2014 6:05:00 PM
    Outstanding piece, Ngoc. The description of love, as a new creature to challenge your space, is deeply expressed in this poem. Amazing imagery, enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems,might find some you like. Peace.