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The Hands Of Time

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The Hands Of Time

As Palm Readers know hands reveal
Just look at the life line
There all is said; a controlled life
'Tis written down in time

As the dish towel washes stains
Dirt 'pon cabinet doors
Placed there by a much larger hand
Hands scrub grease 'pon the floor

Sand through the hour glass flows faster
Time runs out for those hands 
Can fate be changed the last hour
Now hands not held by bands

Uplifting the current flowing
The course sand now stands still 
From a heart of love all 'twas gifted
Not control but love's will


Finis'

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  1. Date: 1/9/2014 3:48:00 PM

    Sounds like a loved one being freed from the grip of a controlling relationship, a powerful poem Sara, thanks for sharing. Loved the finishing stanzas.

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 8:51:00 AM

    Enjoyed aND WILL WAIT FOR THE FULL VERSION, SARA

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 7:18:00 AM

    Already inspiring and moving Sara ..

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 4:30:00 AM

    Sounds interesting Sara, dying to see the rest of it....Peter

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 7:10:00 PM

    seems like it is leading to something very profound, dear!!

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 6:24:00 PM

    waiting, wondering! :) Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 2:13:00 PM

    This is a great beginning to an awesome write my friend! I look real forward to finishing this poem when it is completed! What a glorious piece, Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 1:57:00 PM

    Hi Sara will be back to read the finished piece, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 10:32:00 AM

    So far this is shaping up to be a great poem. That larger hand does indeed place dirt so that we can learn how to scrub it up. Certainly interested to see more on this one Sara.

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 9:31:00 AM

    very interesting, sara...heart line, destiny line included? ... let me know when you're done; can hardly wait to be surprised!.. huggs