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Let me dance your tune, soak our wine
Afloat on irises divine, 
In gloam of midnight I believe
In charms you bring, and charms you leave,

Making me gentle everyday
Through fire and rain, time lifts the way, 
While carats of eyes glow about
A diamond’s remnants, no doubt. 
For never have I felt this flight
When dawn wakes my gaze with delight, 
Then, clutch my hands on mystic trips 
Down rivers shifting moon’s eclipse;

That open light with breaths aglow 
And glitter tide’s sails made to row;
Deeper the years; warmer your face
To relish tunes of last embrace.

Contetst:Gail Doyle's A Diamond's Remnants
by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 1/19/2014 7:15:00 PM

    You're such the romantic, Nette. Love it. Poetic hugs, Juliet.

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 8:28:00 PM

    While carats of eyes glow about...awwwsommee ..wonderful dreamy poem nette...congratulations on..your win....:-) :-) :-)

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 11:58:00 AM

    many congrats nette xx

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 7:13:00 PM

    You shine like the sun Nette, congratulations on your win love xxx

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 1:15:00 PM

    Do I use the phrase...."breath taking" too often? Your poems do that to me !! Congratulations on a well deserved win!

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 8:45:00 AM

    So pretty, congratulations Nette.

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 9:35:00 PM

    Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, nette

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 4:37:00 PM

    Splendid! Congrats on your superb win i n this contest..

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 3:19:00 PM

    A celestial voyage! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 2:59:00 PM

    - Congratulations Nette, on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 9:31:00 AM

    This is so other-worldly and I'm right there with it! So dreamy and soulful..a wonderful poem. BarbaraBoyd

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 8:19:00 PM

    Beautiful poem by you Nette as usual>Enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 12:40:00 AM

    Very nice job and a certain winner. I felt myself carried along on a gentle wave, rising and falling a bit but always in rhythm with the rhyme.

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 8:01:00 PM

    Your imagery is always powerful with that certain romantic flare. Great work as always.

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 5:05:00 PM

    beautiful..Just beautiful!!!

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 2:01:00 AM

    Wow! Beauty personified! I am really loving this one Nette. You truly are a gem, standing out amongst the poets.

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 1:24:00 PM still have that romantic touch,dear Nette;-) Yes,its been awhile and I`ve missed you guys alot.Take Care and be Safe on the other side of this planet.Your poetic talent amazes me,its a winner for sure!! Double Hugs:-)

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 8:22:00 AM

    Elegant & brilliant from its core, its heart. Absolutely beautiful!

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 6:30:00 AM

    Simply beautiful! A winner.

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 11:56:00 PM

    So sweet a write, it's soft as silk, great it has a warmth to it even a romantic delicate touch. enjoyed it alot cheri

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  1. Date: 1/5/2014 6:23:00 PM

    Mouth music nette :) Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 4:57:00 PM

    Very, very beautiful words Nette, without reading others poems I would say this is a winner....Peter

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 3:59:00 PM

    Reads like winning material..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are always encouraging..I hope that this has been a great day for you...Sara

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 1:45:00 PM

    This is an illustrious and completely wondrous write my friend! Your three boldfaced lines are perfect and incredibly central to your poem! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this afternoon! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 1:29:00 PM

    Hi Nette love this good luck in the contest, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 12:37:00 PM

    beautiful words, Nette. I knew you would do this contest eventually!

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 12:16:00 PM

    Wow, awesome work!

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 10:00:00 AM

    Nette, very smooth indeed, I like this a lot…David

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 8:51:00 AM

    There is always so much in your work to marvel at, this one is no exception. Glowing poem, Nette. A joy to be surprisingly rewarded in your contest; thank you for the opputunity.