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I was murdered by your beauty

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I was murdered by your beauty

You murdered my soul with infatuation,
Knowing that I was blinded by your unbelievable beauty,
You still took a gun branded by Love and shot me in the heart,
Leaving each beat fighting,
But it beats stronger at the sound of your voice.
My lungs collapsing leaving me completely breathless,
Just by pressing your lips on mine.
Your kiss leaves me drunk,
Intoxicating my mind,
Leaving me careless about who you actually are.
You whisper love and beauty will kill you,
But been deafened by the sound of your blissful voice,
I was careless.
When you walked away I felt death and everything turned dark.
You murdered me by your beauty.

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  1. Date: 1/4/2014 10:19:00 PM
    Wade, this is a different kind of murder. It sure can kill the best of us daily.. Haha, it kind of reminds me of that one line in King Kong --The Cop: Well, Denham, the airplanes got him. Carl Denham (jack black): Oh no, it wasn't the airplanes. It was beauty killed the beast. - I know that line so well, I love using it on a daily basis. Wade, I had this kind of infatuation when I first met my soul-mate. My heart pounded every time I was near his voice. Love can be fatal. I'd tell you to watch out. But, this kind of murder is good... I have 3 other contests needing closing.. I will stop by again tomorrow... xox~ Linda your newest fan :)

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn
    Date: 1/5/2014 2:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ps that new poem is my last till you come back.
    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn
    Date: 1/5/2014 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Linda my friend :) thank you. and this feeling, isn't it lovely! its a gift I always say, scary but amazing. Ah you are my number one poet. I might post one more poem I wrote when I was in high school. Check it out
  1. Date: 1/4/2014 4:13:00 PM
    If this is what you write now, I hate to see what you'll come up with come Valentine, perhaps we can collaborate a poem together for Valentine's day, wouldn't it be fun, sending you a bushel of Valentine Hearts, and red and white confetti, along with a big red banner that read, "Happy Valentine's Day" xxx

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn
    Date: 1/5/2014 2:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well that could work, why not? thanks for reading! I hope you are well