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Diamonds in the Snow

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Diamonds in the Snow

The wind has fallen, out of bluster, sun ices the sky
upon the crust of frozen snow diadems arise. 

Glittering crowns crest maple trees, diamond on the bough
they bring a beauty and a peace no soul can disavow.

The wind has fallen, out of bluster, sun ices the sky
twinkling like diamond remnants, snow lends the day surprise.

Glittering crowns crest maple trees, diamond on the bough
oh how I hate to hear the roar of the coming plough.

Poet: Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 2/17/2014 5:01:00 PM

    There are positive and negative aspects to winter as you show so clearly. Stay warm and keep writing! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 7:51:00 PM

    Nice set of rhyming couplets describing typical winter scenery.

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 4:33:00 PM

    nice, write congrats! like the way you wrote it, real can picture it! oxoxo

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 7:12:00 PM

    Lovely to look at the snow with sun glaring in it like diamonds. Beautiful poem, Debbie. Congrats!

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 8:17:00 PM

    Yes....I like the clear roads...but don't they leave behind a dirty yukky mess! Wonderful win Debbie..congratulations

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 10:30:00 PM

    Very good. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 11:57:00 AM

    many congrats debs xx

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 7:12:00 PM

    Way to go Deb, 1st place all the way, I sprinkle fresh roses at your feet xxx

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 1:13:00 PM

    Loved the look outside your window........big congratulations to you, Deb !!

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 9:07:00 AM

    Way to go with this great winnin work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 8:41:00 AM

    I enjoyed rereading your winning poem. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 8:37:00 AM

    Enjoyed your poem. Very expressive. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 9:31:00 PM

    Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, Deb

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 6:06:00 PM

    wow, Debs. I love this one. Outstanding and a well deserved win!

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 4:49:00 PM

    "Sun ices the sky"...love it..congrats on your big win

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 4:34:00 PM

    Wonderful write,Debbie..Congrats on your win...And thanks on for your comment and correction of my Haiku.......Light and love...

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 2:54:00 PM

    - Congratulations, Debbie on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 10:09:00 AM

    with this shimmer, we don't want to plough...lovely word scenes.debbie.. huggs

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 6:47:00 AM

    Beautiful images of a pure snowy world. In your comment on my poem you asked where I was hiding. I was blessed to have all six grandchildren with me for the holidays. I immersed myself in the joy of them and kept the world at bay.

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 8:56:00 AM

    Great piece, Debbie; enjoyed this very much. Read it several times. Love your style and craftsmanship with words. Kudos, my friend :)

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/5/2014 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Chan nice to hear from you.
  1. Date: 1/4/2014 4:45:00 PM

    Wonderful poem. Sounds beautiful but very cold. As we swelter in the thirties you freeze up, this world is amazing, so is your poem....peter

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 1:52:00 PM

    The snow can look like a million diamonds. I enjoyed your Couplet Debbie. I hope you are having a good weekend.

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 9:22:00 AM

    !!!

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 1:29:00 AM

    Excellent piece and image my dear friend Debbie (I'm sorry for calling you before in short cut, Deb). I like/love your poem so much. A winner for sure. Thank u so much for sharing your precious gem to me this afternoon. May I also take this opportunity to thank you for my placement in your contest. I've enjoyed it & thanks also for the inspiration to write a story. More blessings! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 11:52:00 PM

    Hi Debbie! Enjoyed reading your take to this, how you made everything bejeweled, very nice. Happy 2014 to you!

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 10:37:00 PM

    Wow, you have surely written a tremendous write here my friend! I loved how awesome you made this cold poem! The frigidness is spectacular and illustriously portrayed! I really enjoyed reading this majestic piece this evening! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 7:37:00 PM

    ps........I'm so grateful for you choosing my Santa poem, Debbie......thank you very much....it is my honor to win in your contest, and do well from your eyes perspective! Thank you!

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 7:35:00 PM

    I am shivering just thinking of how cold you must be on this below freezing night (of the big storm)! Hope you are staying cozy and warm, dear Deb......and hope those nasty ploughs can dig you out....diamonds or no diamonds!!

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 6:22:00 PM

    I am just not a big fan of the cold my friend but i am of your poem, it gives a beautiful chill to a wintery scense, nicely done my friend. Enjoyed the calm of a peaceful wintery write. Thank you for the congrads on eco-clause enjoyed the challenage to write somehting different for christmas. cheri

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 3:01:00 PM

    White majestic treasured moments! Love it Debbie! My best, chuck

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