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Diamonds in the Sky

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Diamonds in the Sky

A breath from heaven crystalized
Like diamond's remnants from the sky,
Then settled in a wisp of hair -
Dripped on your cheek and glistened there.

At first I thought it was a tear
And reached my hand as you drew near,
But then the smile within your eyes
Reflected diamonds in the sky.


Written by Craig Cornish
Dec. 28, 2013
For Gail's Diamond Remnants Contest

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  1. Date: 1/20/2014 5:42:00 AM

    A perfect write on this theme!... And I see that it won too,, Congrats Craig on a very well deserved win... Absolutely charmed by the captivating lines in this poem of yours!! gautami

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 1:30:00 AM

    Congrats on your win with this beauty Craig. I am so happy I didn't miss reading this one. I loved the romanticism in every line. .Bravo!

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 8:38:00 PM

    The first line took my breath away Craig....wonderful poem....congratulations on your win...

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 11:59:00 AM

    many congrats Craig xx

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 7:14:00 PM

    Lovely win Craig congrats xxx

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 8:43:00 AM

    Wowzer, I just love this one Craig, bravo and congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 8:39:00 AM

    Well done. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 9:36:00 PM

    Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, Craig

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 3:01:00 PM

    - Congratulations Craig, on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 7:32:00 AM

    This is beautiful. I love it.

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 7:30:00 AM

    I'm sure Gail will love it Craig; it is beautiful in all it facets :)

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 5:27:00 PM

    Beautifully rendered poem for the contest. A lyrical and graceful read.

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 10:56:00 AM

    truly wonderful poetry, a joy to read

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 6:39:00 PM

    Absolutely beautiful..she's gonna love it!

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 5:10:00 AM

    This is a beauty of a poem, this is how life should work:)

  1. Date: 1/2/2014 4:08:00 PM

    You left stars in my eyes........(we have wiped away a few tears too, now that you are home again :) !!! You did not deserve being singled out, we all know that many others have crossed the line!

  1. Date: 1/2/2014 1:32:00 AM

    good thing you left someting for us to read whie you were gone, craig... poetic gem sparkling so clearly in many facets... welcome back!... huggs

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 1:31:00 PM

    HAVE YOU BEEN BANNED???? Please email me at fastforthem@outlook.com It's a temporary addy, but should still work... I will email you my real addy once I get yours. I think the world of you and your poetry, unique style and willingness to stand up for others. It is wrong you being penalized. LOVE YA!

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 11:57:00 PM

    this is very lovely, Craig!!

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 8:37:00 PM

    Beautiful, Craig. Loved every single line. Masterfully written, my friend :)

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 8:17:00 PM

    Wow...love the poem and especially the ending. Happy New Year !

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 1:26:00 AM

    An extremely beautiful poem my dear friend, Craig. I love it and enjoyed this so much today. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your lovely comments on my poem and blogs. Sorry for coming by only now. But I also want to wish you and your love ones a Happy & Prosperous New Year 2014! Wishing you all the best. love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 10:28:00 AM

    A very well written poem Craig, I enjoyed reading it....Roger

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 8:04:00 PM

    this is stunning Craig....beautifully penned with such vivid images! Love it...good luck in the contest~ :)

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 5:19:00 PM

    sooooooo romantic and the full circle effect of this piece in so few lines is lovely and haunting. Hello. I am still fighting this flu. It has settled into the lungs. So enjoyed this verse. Hope the new year is wonderful for you and yours...

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 12:35:00 AM

    Craig.....your poetry......astounds!!! You know that!!! :-)

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 7:18:00 PM

    Well written Craig...and that turn was great!! Happy New Year! chuck

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 6:59:00 PM

    Dear Craig, Your lines slide like satin on after another pinging at my heart. So well written in meter and rhyme never losing the sweetness. beautiful. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 4:50:00 PM

    Oh the softness of your words like the velvet petals of a rose that gently kiss ones heart and soul! Breathtakingly beautiful your hearts words! Loved this! :)

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 2:46:00 PM

    - A beautiful poem that is perfect for Gail contest ! - Good Luck !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    cornish Avatar craig cornish Date: 12/28/2013 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne Lise, you are a love!