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Diamonds in the Snow

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Diamonds in the Snow

A Diamond's Remnants beneath a full moon their kiss in winter’s first snow. . . her soft eyes glowing her delighted gasp as he opens the ring case. . . the night sky sparkles the months since she died he wakes sometimes to dreams of diamonds in her eyes in dementia’s fog the snow, the sky and her eyes. . . a diamond's remnants Written 12/28/13 by Andrea Dietrich (I am using the title Diamonds in the Snow to fulfill a rule of the contest, but the real title would be A Diamond's Remnants)

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  1. Date: 2/10/2014 12:35:00 PM
    Congratulations Petal :)

  1. Date: 2/8/2014 9:46:00 PM
    Congratulations Petal. Loved this poem. Will take me a while to catch up on yours so I'll be jumping top and bottom for some timeTake care, Richard

  1. Date: 2/2/2014 9:16:00 PM
    Nicely done on this one. My computer is acting up tonight but I want to finsih last year so I will have read you up to this year. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 8:50:00 PM
    Congratulations Andrea on your wonderful win..:-) :-) :-) :-)

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 12:02:00 PM
    many congrats Andy xx

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 9:45:00 AM
    Congats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 9:05:00 AM
    This is very powerful and moving. Congratulations on your win. If you have a chance read my poem "pickpocket" I think you will appreciate it.

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 9:02:00 AM
    So full of angst..another wonderful win for you. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 9:41:00 PM
    Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 4:56:00 PM
    Congrats on a fine win Andrea

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 4:41:00 PM
    Amazing piece,beautiful write.....Congrats on your win......

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 3:08:00 PM
    - Congratulations Andrea, on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 9:44:00 PM
    Wow! I love how you tied all these together as a diamond's remnants. Very clever, Andrea!

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 9:07:00 AM
    Beautiful. Memories of love always shine through

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 7:57:00 PM
    I really do like this form, and spent more time studying it than the others I think, and still think it's one of the harder forms to write. Great work, and as always, I'm sure you don't need luck for the contest, but I wish the best and you should do well.

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 6:11:00 PM
    I like the age progression from verse to verse. This is a very dramatic poem with beautiful imagery. Amazing work, Andrea! Good luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments.

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 12:48:00 PM
    such pathos, andie... on top of the shelf; beautiful!.. huggs

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 2:44:00 AM
    Probably the best Haiku I've ever read. It's also a very passionate, deep and caring write, tinged with melancholy in nostalgic hue.

  1. Date: 1/2/2014 6:08:00 PM
    Ahhh..a tearjerker...and winner.....great job Andrea

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 8:23:00 PM
    lovely Andrea happy New Year Shadow x smile hug

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