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Deep Moist Caves

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Deep Moist Caves



There's a place where men love to go To explore dark moist caves The deepest, moistest caves known to man A most favourite spot they crave If you're not in shape it can make ya sweat But how amazing to succumb Deep in the heart of these dark moist caves You must try it you really must come If your mind's down in the gutter my friends Wasn't talking about sex you see Had ya fooled, was talking about travel To the Lost Sea Exhibit, Tennessee! <3 <3 <3 © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 12/25/2013 6:04:00 AM
    ya ya not buyin it for a bit my friend, cant fool a fellow canuckian, Merry Christmas Jack

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/25/2013 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL Merry Christmas Carl!
  1. Date: 12/24/2013 2:25:00 PM
    ....liar ;)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/24/2013 2:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL!!!
  1. Date: 12/24/2013 10:27:00 AM
    I had several spelunkers where I used to work. One had to go into CarlisBad Caverns to bring someone out with a broken leg. Only professional spelunkers were allowed that far in there... Missouri and Arkansas are riddled with caves. A few, never make it back out. Our caves follow major land faults. Hannibal, Mo. is honeycombed with caves. In the 70's 2 small boys were lost there... People from all over the US came to find them. They were never found... The caves were that dangerous & extensive.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/24/2013 1:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I've actually been to The Lost Sea in Tennessee a couple of time... intriguing! xox
  1. Date: 12/24/2013 8:44:00 AM
    Lol...Jack loved this lil' adventure to the 'dark caves' with you;) Such a lil' stinker...lol

    Hoose Avatar Mary Jo Hoose
    Date: 12/24/2013 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lOL...HMMM WELL YEAH THERE IS AT THAT..;)
    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/24/2013 1:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Are there any deep dark moist caves in Kentucky??? wink wink! Warm loving hugs, Jack xox
  1. Date: 12/24/2013 7:00:00 AM
    Ya right, you were talking about the Lost Sea Exhibit, Tennessee...sure my friend! Ha ha, you have brought a tear to my eye with the humor of this incredible poem Jack! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning! What a funny piece, Great Work!!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/24/2013 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have actually toured The Lost Sea caves more than once! Can't imagine what everyone was first thinking!!! LOL
  1. Date: 12/24/2013 6:59:00 AM
    KENNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU WERE NOT!!! YOU ARE NAUGHTY NAUGHTY NAUGHTY!!!!!!! PHEW! Dear me, dear me...that had me going! Be a good boy. It is Christmas time. Hope you have a merry one...Umnmmmmm...stay away from those caves. They are DANGEROUS! ;)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/24/2013 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ROTFLMAO!!!! You're a hoot Miss Boop from Beirut! Methinks we're BOTH a bit on the naughty side, eh!!! Best of the season to you and yours, Eileen! Love and kisses, Kenny! xox