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where braves amid the mists ignite


where braves amid the mists ignite

He knows the dance of lines at night,
 and their expanding, wayward trip
the perils and the clipons' grip.

Convergent margins that unite
 where once per life, lines sternly meet
to be horizons' incomplete.

Past scenes recite and years invite,
 abstruse the ranges, lift and share
with precognitions' blue affair.

His dream abides on beaming light,
  bike's thrust approaches distant knots
and his horizons' linking thoughts.

Where braves their destiny incite
 as lines embellish roads' decor,
and scenes return to years before.

Defiantly his words indite,
 what his third destiny perfects,
trajectories of skyward wrecks.

Where braves amid the mists ignite
 their speeding dreams of years eighteen
and turn to woods of evergreen.

He knows the dance of lines at night,
 convergent margins that unite,
past scenes recite and years invite.
 His dreams abide on beaming light
where braves their destiny incite,
 defiantly his words indite
where braves amid the mists ignite.

© 12-23-2013, G. Venetopoulos
(Iambic tetrameter)

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  1. Date: 2/13/2014 5:52:00 PM

    Thought I should read your constanza too. These poems about mythological characters sure are exciting since I used to study quite a few of them. Great to see the old familiar names.

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 2:08:00 AM

    Very sinuously woven in your lucid, flowing style. An entry of highest order. Good luck in the contest.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 1/10/2014 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mark. The poem was dedicated to a lady. It is better that way. G.
    Peterson Avatar Mark Peterson Date: 1/10/2014 2:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Do I now read that you've withdrawn this from the contest? I hope not and cannot fathom the known events, unknown to me. I wish you the very best, regardless.
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 5:10:00 PM

    Wonderful work here, and happy new year my friend i look forward to reading more of your work in the year to come

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 4:43:00 AM

    Happy New Year , Giorgio !! Do tell me your plans for New Year ! May this year bring lots of love , blessings , and fulfill many wishes and yes , lots of HAPPINESS !!! A wonderful write !! Love and smiles , Saanvi :))

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 4:07:00 AM

    - Hi Giorgio, thanks for the lovely poem. - Looking forward to a nice friendship and many new poems from you in the new year 2014! - I wish you and your family all the best for the new year. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 1:07:00 AM

    Hi, my very dear friend Giorgio! It's always my great honor to come and read once again your excellent dedication & masterpiece. I'm loving& enjoying it so much. You're a very talented poet. Kudos & big hugs! Thank u so much for sharing your precious gems. I want also to take this opportunity to thank you for your loving support, encouragement, inspiring comments on my poems, warm thoughts & everything. More blessings! Happy New Year 2014 to U & your family! love lots & biggest hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 7:12:00 AM

    I smell sea salt and see lighthouses in this sea ward piece Giorgio, hope you had a great festive Christmas, xxx

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/29/2013 7:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rose!
  1. Date: 12/29/2013 5:19:00 AM

    Hey! Came back to read this one again and leave a comment this time :) Recollections of your speeding days, biking days..!! Yes, I understand how someone who's you, your dreams abide on beaming lights, your description carries the reader with you along that fast drive..convergent margins,, those woods evergreen when you were 18..(third destiny is what I couldn't get, neither here nor there- 'besought of honors...' ). This is an excellent form, and you did it marvelously! G

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/29/2013 7:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Gautami.
    phookan Avatar gautami phookan Date: 12/29/2013 5:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    To my faves, Giorgio...
  1. Date: 12/29/2013 12:06:00 AM

    Giorgio, I can tell you grasp the true meaning of this form with this excellent write. It is a very impressive entry that is sure to be seen at the top of the winner's list. It is just beautiful! I am saving this into my favorites. Have a blessed New Year!

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/30/2013 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    After the known events, I felt that I had to withdraw my entry from the contest. But thank you for honoring me with your kindest remark and acknowledgement. G.
    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/29/2013 7:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Connie!
  1. Date: 12/27/2013 9:57:00 PM

    Hi Giorgio, Awesome write my friend..Happy Holidays! Ken

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/29/2013 7:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ken!
  1. Date: 12/27/2013 5:59:00 PM

    Stellar

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/29/2013 7:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you James!
  1. Date: 12/27/2013 11:55:00 AM

    quite mystical,G; a defining contanza in its form. best.. wishing you the gladness and tiding this season holds.. merry Christmas!.. huggsc

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/27/2013 11:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you nette! G.
  1. Date: 12/26/2013 10:01:00 PM

    what a beautiful write, Giorgio. You write with yout heart. the value in it is just beautiful. I wish u a had a blast christmas and great holidays. thanks for your kind words, hugss -dinda

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/27/2013 11:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Dinda! :)
  1. Date: 12/26/2013 9:09:00 PM

    A very beautiful write, Giorgio...

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/27/2013 11:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Bindu!
  1. Date: 12/26/2013 3:22:00 PM

    Words are where the spirit reside. Awesome, Georgio! Hope you had a wonderful Christmas :) May your new year be exceptionally amazing, incredibly astounding, and stunningly marvelous :))

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/26/2013 8:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Toquyen, I reciprocate the wishes. :) G.
  1. Date: 12/26/2013 3:03:00 PM

    This is as beautiful as your heart...Magnificent !!!Happy boxing day or what s left of it : )

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/26/2013 8:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Charm! :)
  1. Date: 12/26/2013 4:49:00 AM

    Interesting work..Dreams do come true sometimes and seem like precognitions..Thanks for the visit to my page..I hope that your Christmas day was all that you had dreamed it would be..Sara

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/26/2013 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sara.
  1. Date: 12/25/2013 6:43:00 PM

    beautiful .BB

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/26/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.
  1. Date: 12/25/2013 4:08:00 PM

    Great write Giorgio, I should imagine this one will do very well in the contest. Have a wonderful Christmas, my friend....peter

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/26/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Peter!
  1. Date: 12/25/2013 9:58:00 AM

    Great poem Giorgio!Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours too!

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/26/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Kash!
  1. Date: 12/25/2013 7:02:00 AM

    Awesome write my friend! I want to extend my wishes for a merry Christmas to you and your family! Enjoy this holy day!

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/26/2013 2:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Russel!
  1. Date: 12/25/2013 1:51:00 AM

    I just love seeing the end product, that little poem that the beginning lines produce. You did a great job getting the lines to go together so well. By now you are well into the Christmas day and maybe even finished with it, so I will just say a happy coming new year!!!

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/25/2013 4:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is 1:51pm in Athens. Thank you; it is a great poem. G.
  1. Date: 12/24/2013 10:57:00 PM

    Loved it Giorgio, nadolig llawen, merry Xmas....Seren

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/25/2013 4:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Merry Christmas to you, Seren. :) G.
  1. Date: 12/24/2013 4:36:00 AM

    Merry Christmas Giorgio !! Hope you are enjoying the holidays ! Great write ! Do tell me what gifts Santa gave you !! May this year end with happiness , and lets all welcome the NEW YEAR !! SMILES AND HUGS !! Love <3 Saanvi :))

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/24/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Merry Christmas to you too, kind Saanvi! :) Santa sent me good poetry-friends! And you are one of them! Thank you, hugs and many smiles! :) G.