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Sun Dancing

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Below is the poem entitled Sun Dancing which was written by poet Sara Kendrick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Sun Dancing

The sun dancing upon the placid lake
Soft ripples sparkling as the river runs
Deep swift current rushing to its fate
Like diamonds exposed by morn's warming sun

Soft ripples sparkling as the river runs
Delightful to see the sun kiss the lake  
Like diamonds exposed by morn's warming sun
Those ripples that sing from the river's wake

Delightful to see the sun kiss the lake
Deep swift current rushing to its fate
Those ripples that sing from the river's wake
The sun dancing upon the placid lake

Inspired by Andrea Dietrich's contest

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  1. Date: 1/15/2014 11:29:00 AM
    Sara I was just reading through some of your amazing collection and I found this one, which I love. This style is new to me but you inspired me to try it. I called it In My Arms I hope I've done it justice Steve

  1. Date: 12/25/2013 9:11:00 PM
    I love this poem Sara....reminds me of many times I sit fishing while the sun reflects off the lake...hope you had a great Christmas...

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 1:08:00 AM
    Sara,, Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Merry Christmas, [hope you are feeling better!] Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 2:55:00 PM
    - Outside my window there are storm and heavy rain ..... I can dream myself into your "Sun" poem ..... beautiful, Sara! - Good luck in the contest! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 2:46:00 PM
    A write flowing in imagery like the water it shadows Sara..' good reading inndeed

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 11:29:00 AM
    I am really enjoying your writings based on Andrea's contest! They are very creative especially since you are using different forms! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious poem this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!