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Cinquain 9

Leo Larry Amadore Avatar Leo Larry Amadore - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Cinquain 9 which was written by poet Leo Larry Amadore. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Cinquain 9

five lines
to make a sketch
in words of tree and book,
of sunset hour and rest, of fire
and star

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  1. Date: 2/18/2014 9:46:00 PM
    this is a nice one, Leo! Let me see a few more of your poems.

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 7:16:00 AM
    Perfect! Have a great day.

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 2:04:00 PM
    Beautiful! yes 2 more syllables to be added in Line 4 :)

    Amadore Avatar Leo Larry Amadore
    Date: 1/10/2014 5:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks...I think I must have forgotten how to count; please see the revised version with the two additional syllables....
  1. Date: 1/6/2014 6:37:00 PM
    You have done well with your five lines.

    Amadore Avatar Leo Larry Amadore
    Date: 1/10/2014 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Richard....you were right about the syllable count (I suppose I just didn't use my fingers and toes properly...) Please see the revised version with the two additional needed syllables....Thanks again!
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/6/2014 6:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I re-read and hour can be pronounced as two sylables so I stand corrected.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/6/2014 6:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    try adding two sylables to line four and you will have a perfect cinquain.
  1. Date: 12/30/2013 5:37:00 PM
    a lovely form very well written enjoyed it Happy new year Shadow x smile hug 7

  1. Date: 12/26/2013 11:17:00 AM
    Crafted swell! Great cinquain. Elements. Pls do read my latest poem. Donot coment dis time.

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 6:47:00 AM
    beautiful images to create a picture, Leo