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Goddess Luna -Constanza-

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Goddess Luna -Constanza-

Moon goddess in nocturnal flight,
     When Luna’s rise at midnight breaks
     One’s deepest breath of awe she takes.

Her wings are formed by silky light.
     Silver shards beam through drifting clouds,
     Curtains of light in misty shrouds;

Her hair billows radiant bright.
     Her face a luminescent glow,
     Captive of heaven’s indigo.

She whispers secrets to the night,
     Twinkling stars light years away keep
     Peaceful solitude in our sleep.

In dream state she relates her might.
     Luna keeps vigil over night;
     Genders poets compelled to write.
     
Emotions bared with-in her light;
     Her mood through pen is oft’ displayed
     In violence or love allayed.

A lovely view, her awesome sight.
     Beauty remains beyond compare,
     The gift of love she deigns to share.


Moon goddess in nocturnal flight,
Her wings are formed by silky light.
Her hair billows radiant bright.
She whispers secrets to the night,
In dream state she relates her might.
Emotions bared with-in her light;
A lovely view, her awesome sight.


December 18, 2013

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  1. Date: 6/3/2014 7:14:00 AM
    This is sooo beautiful! The imagery is fantastic "wings are formed by silky light"! No wonder it is a winner! Bravo!

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 10:59:00 AM
    Congrats on a fine win Connie...

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 2/24/2014 11:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I caught the cold/flu and have been knocked off my feet for over two weeks. I owe so many comments and I am trying to play catch up. Thank you for your comment Joseph.
  1. Date: 2/10/2014 12:27:00 PM
    Beautiful Connie and truly ethereal - This form really deserved to be recognized here on the soup forms. Please mail them so it will be included--you'll be famous someday! Thank You for the form and this lovely and artistic write!

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 2/24/2014 11:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for all your kind words about my form Craig and also for giving me 4th place in your contest. I was rooting for the winners you chose. I don't know who to write about having my form included here at Soup? Please give me a name to send it to? Thanks again Craig for doing a contest on my form. I greatly appreciate it. Mahalo, Connie
  1. Date: 2/9/2014 11:26:00 PM
    I have read this one many times and so admire its mystery and ethereal mood. Congratulations and many thanks for your inspiration.

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 7:50:00 PM
    Connie, you might want to check out the winners of the Constanza contest and see how you like the winners.I am reading a few of them right now and came here to wish you congratulations! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 10:34:00 PM
    Connie, thanks for your sweet comment recently. Just missing out on two days, I am SO behind here. It makes such a difference in getting others to read my poems when I don't do comments!!

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 10:54:00 PM
    Beautifully penned. Enjoyed your wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 7:35:00 PM
    Well, I certainly had to come have a look and was pleased to see it written about the moon. Another point for the night sky team and oh so well done. Surely top spot for you.

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 11:57:00 AM
    It is excellent! Congrats on the beautiful poem and the exquisite form! G

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 12:35:00 AM
    A wonderful write and form. Will give it a try in the New Year. Hope your Christmas was a nice family time and that 2014 will be full of good times and joy. Love, SuZ

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 10:18:00 AM
    Wonderful idea, Connie. After all, how can one say anything limited when it comes to Old Maid Moon. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 3:21:00 AM
    Connie, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 4:54:00 PM
    Wonderful poem Connie, great rhyme, great flow and fantastic words. well done....peter

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 3:59:00 PM
    yes, great imagery and I love how you made this so lovely and flowing, connie. The little poem that comes from it at the bottom is such a treat at the end!!

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 3:58:00 PM
    Connie, I hope you get your computer woes fixed soon, dear. Let me see your CONSTANZA now. I hope everyone realizes they are looking at one done by the CREATOR of this form here!!

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 9:22:00 AM
    Stunning piece! I really like your form. I agree with Craig, this should be recognized as a new form. I wrote my first one and enjoyed writing it. Merry Christmas.

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 4:28:00 AM
    Reading two Constanza in a single day, I am equipped enough to write one, Connie

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 1:44:00 AM
    Interesting that we both wrote Constanza with the moon in prominence. This is lovely, and you definitely imbued it with the ethereal essence it deserves. I especially think the secondary poem is terrific. It bears up so well though standing alone.

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 8:43:00 PM
    She sounds like a lovely goddess, you describe her so well, enjoyed your verse Connie xxx