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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 2/14/2014 4:26:00 PM
    Listened to "Lonesome" all night long. Will listen again tonight. It's hypnotic. L, Bev

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 10:59:00 AM
    A BEAUTIFUL ONE !!!!!!

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 9:50:00 AM
    Beautiful. I'm going to check out the link now. :3 Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 1:47:00 PM
    I really appreciate this poem's rhythm and rhyme. The quandary to be faced is vexing, for when the feeling's gone, there is not power in the universe to make it return. The heart has turned aside. Very enjoyable write.

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 12:57:00 PM
    This poem has a nice lyrical quality. I like the "Win some . . . lose some, Lonesome" hook. It works well here. The narrator sounds kind of resigned to his fate, like maybe this isn't his first (failed) relationship? Anyway, I didn't mean to get all analytical. Good work.

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 6:52:00 PM
    Very nice poem Chuck. this poem most definitely wins my praise, Well done my friend....Peter

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 5:34:00 PM
    Life's only guarantee, is winning and losing. It makes us who we are. Nice work, Chuck!

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 9:06:00 AM
    - Pleased to read - You win my voice and a smile - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)