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A Man Eater She Was

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A Man Eater She Was

Mom warn me of girls like you but I didn’t listen, 
You was out to search and destroy, 
A sheep with wolf clothing, 
How did you manage to keep the disguise? Wait I have the answer.

I can see how some insecurities, could play a role, 
Or even perhaps the strain of absent parent could be a factor, 
Or maybe the guy that was last did you the favor of leave a chain letter, 
But When I looked in your eyes how could you lie without even blinking, where is the remorse? 

I can see it now lust to add to a plus of size clothing, 
Brilliance over arrogance and time portray all, 
And time heals all, and when I look in the mirror, 
A better man I am and thoughts to thank her and now I can smile.

A man eater indeed, lust before trust was her deed.

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  1. Date: 3/4/2014 6:50:00 PM
    Deep. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 9:04:00 AM
    Quite emotional write, Louis

    Borgo Avatar Louis Borgo
    Date: 12/15/2013 9:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for always comment on my poems I will have to return the favor and read some of yours
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 8:47:00 PM
    Yikes Louis! Glad she was dismissed lol. Much emotion here. Very nice.

    Borgo Avatar Louis Borgo
    Date: 12/15/2013 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kind words and I will have to read some your poems sometime.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 8:00:00 PM
    I am so glad you tried a lot of forms!! Are you trying to publish?

    Borgo Avatar Louis Borgo
    Date: 12/14/2013 8:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'am in the Walt Whitman contest right now and i don't think i will win but they ask me for years to enter so. But yes Im trying to get publish. It might be best to go the self publishing just waiting objections just put it god hands thank you for asking and also those that gave thumps up on my page.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Yup woman can be that way too? Hope you're well and happy haven't heard from you in ages. Light & Love

    Borgo Avatar Louis Borgo
    Date: 12/14/2013 7:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Debbie!!! I Apologize for not keeping touch I finish school trying make something out nothing and I also took up your advice to write in each form this not all my material, hope you are doing okay and god bless.