Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

a wheezing rat

jack horne Avatar jack horne - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled a wheezing rat which was written by poet jack horne. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by jack horne

Best Jack Horne Poems

+ Fav Poet

a wheezing rat

a wheezing rat - -
hefty vet bills and
a smiling daughter


for Roy's Kintsukuroi contest

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 1/17/2014 7:47:00 PM
    Thanks for participating in the Kintsukuroi contest!

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 10:31:00 PM
    LOL! There's nothing magical as a child's smile after saving her pet...Love your Senryu and best wishes for the contest! Hope your weekend's going great! xxAnnalise

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 10:16:00 PM
    How we care for our pets. Fun write. Thanks for the smile.

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 2:02:00 PM
    Hey Jack, quick enjoyed your wit tonight, hope you are doing okay ;) lfde

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 5:05:00 PM
    oh wow, stark images fill this page, jack.. a senryu at it;s finest.. huggs

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 10:55:00 AM
    Aha to satisfy her pet whims eh. Witty kariok...oh whats dat name again. I likd yor humord title too. And eh watch out d rat doesnt make her wheeze. Mery xmas

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 5:45:00 AM
    Great showing of talent in writing this one..Interesting subject..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 10:03:00 PM
    :) love animal poems. everybody's happy.

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 9:33:00 PM
    Brilliant, a simply brilliant write my friend! I truly loved reading this poem of a wonderful pet, the love of a daughter is more important than the cost of a vet bill! You have captured the heart of owning a child's pet! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 9:26:00 PM
    hmmm, I don't even know which contest this is!!! Wheezing rat, how funny. Jack, thanks for catching up on my poems tonight. You are a great friend. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 5:40:00 PM
    LOL you know I haven't found this contest yet the contest list is a mile long! Happy Holidays Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 5:30:00 PM
    Love it, a beautiful inspiring write. Best of luck in the comp.

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 4:49:00 PM
    Nice one, well written Jack, good luck in the contest....peter