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Becca's Muse

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Becca's Muse

I looked high and low to find Becca's muse
I searched in the barn looked under a goose

For that strange fellow with long flowing hair
He wears interesting clothes and has great flare

In his pocket inspiration is kept
He sprinkled magic whenever she slept

We are sad she hasn't written in days
No more poetry to read and to praise

I keep up my searching, him I must find
Without her verse I'll go out of my mind

My search ends after I look every place
He hoots and hollers he so loved the chase

"Go back to my friend she misses you bad,
if you rush back she will truly be glad."

He smiled a broad smile and bid me farewell
"It won't be long, she'll have stories to tell."

Sometimes a muse must gather inspiration
Running from me his little vacation 

So now he's back with her where he belongs
Soon we'll read poetry and lovely songs


Dedicated to my friend Becca.











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  1. Date: 1/7/2014 6:40:00 PM

    A funny write here i love it when you write like this lol inspiration can be found anywhere a muse can be something very simple or really hard to find at times i've had both problems myself, but i did so much enjoy this funny write sir, and i'm glad you like my vacation write also. cheri don't leave without me ok lol

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/8/2014 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm glad you liked my little tale.
  1. Date: 12/18/2013 8:06:00 AM

    Just had to stop back by here for another little dose of friendship :) Hope you're enjoying the days leading up to Christmas...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/18/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, it has been Busy but also good. I enjoyed my short visit in Ontario. I hope you are enjoying your time as well.
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 8:06:00 AM

    A wonderful tribute to a fantastic and inspiring poet. I loved the image of the muse hiding and playing!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/17/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I had fun with this one. Thanks for commenting.
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 7:00:00 PM

    Oh yes, very a-muse-ing write Rick. I see Becca appreciated your help in sending him back in the right direction. That's the only trouble with muses, they tend to wander lol. Take care, Richard

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/15/2013 9:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You kill me Richard, always so clever.;0)
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 10:27:00 AM

    LOL--Becca will love this Richard!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/15/2013 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, you can read her comment below.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 9:53:00 PM

    A wonderful poem, Richard, and a very nice tribute to one of the most talented poets on the Soup! Becca is one of my favorites, too! I really enjoyed reading this whimsical poem this evening!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/15/2013 12:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kelly, so glad you enjoyed my poem.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 7:22:00 PM

    I know she'll love these encouraging words Richard...you're kind...:-)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/15/2013 12:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, I enjoyed writing it and comments like yours make it even more enjoyable.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 1:54:00 PM

    Becca's muse was going to make a visit in my previous clerihew lol. Now I'm going to ask someone to sponsor a contest entitled Becca's muse lol. Hint, hint. Good fun humor here. Great work.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/14/2013 4:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Waylamd.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 8:29:00 AM

    Awwwwwww! I am smiling so big right now Rick lol Thank you so much for this cute and encouraging poem for me! You know, I seriously think this helped, I did feel my muse sprinkle some inspiration on me last night :) Thank you for chasing and finding my muse. Rick, you are an awesome friend, thank you. And big hugs to my friends below, too <3

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 12/18/2013 8:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you F.J. Big hugs to both of you ;)
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/17/2013 7:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Becca Lucas you do not forget you have friends who are actually 'here' for you :) Richard just demonstrated that beautifully. Thank you for reaching out to our Becca Rich ;)
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/14/2013 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Where's my big hug??? Just kidding, I'm glad you enjoyed my little poem.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 4:50:00 AM

    It's finished!! Lovely dedication to Becca. Her writing is truly wonderful. She is a top poetess here on the site. Good thing you found her muse or her fans would go wild.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/14/2013 5:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Eillen. Good morning.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 1:13:00 AM

    this is PRECIOUS!!! stanza five has a typo. I really enjoyed it. It's totally clever.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/14/2013 5:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, you'd think with only two fingers I would make less mistakes *lol*.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 8:44:00 PM

    Lovely flowing piece here! A sweet dedication too. Keep it up! Always, Laura

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/13/2013 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Laura.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 5:37:00 PM

    LOVE the start Richard! LOL Keep looking ;)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/17/2013 7:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes it is; and it's perfect for Becca...beautiful and kind ;)
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/13/2013 8:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Tot, all finished now.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 5:02:00 PM

    Ha Ha! So funny! just wait till Becca reads this! She is going to be rolling on the floor laughing her buns off. So funny. Thanks for the giggle. love and hugs, Catie :)

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 12/14/2013 8:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh...it is so adorable. Love it. hugs, catie :)
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/13/2013 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Happy weekend to you as well. All finished now. Thanks for being the first to comment. I am a big fan of Becca as well.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/13/2013 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Catie, glad I made you laugh. The poem is finished now.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 4:29:00 PM

    I come back later when its fimished..I loved Becca s poetry since day one I saw her post B-) Hope you are fine ..Happy wkend

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/13/2013 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Charmaine my comment to you bounce up above my response to Catie.