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Take the ribbon from my hair

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Take the ribbon from my hair

With the dawning of the day Like a fertile vine which creeps amidst the purple hues of Tuscan fields I yield my fruit Before first autumn rain These eyes in wait for you Starved like a harvest moon you come to me Silk honey of dusk An opalescent shadow descending in the cradle of my arms Feeding nectar from my lips Repeaning my soul Amuzing my solitude with blazing fire Upon scarlet foliage Our kiss 'Neath cashmere sheets Your breath within me Dolce vino Those fingers on my neck's nape Viola in concerto In sleep,once again in dreams where eyelids close to the bliss of twilight dew I see you

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  1. Date: 3/15/2014 10:39:00 AM

    I've said this so many times, but there is such a breathless quality to all your writes. I hope to hear your lovely voice on Drake's program.....coming up soon !! Have a lovely weekend!

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 2:46:00 PM

    A kristofferson fan perhaps by the title....beautiful piece .... written with passion ...enjoyed it greatly...

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 11:55:00 PM

    Wot can I add that other people already haven't? You always express so much passion and longing -- wait! That's already been said. Ok, I'll try something different. Your hubby still doesn't enjoy reading poetry? Do you ever read your poetry to him?

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 12:42:00 PM

    Absolutely sensational, colorful romance Charmaine. I adore the Meditterrainian feel to this etheral and ageless poem. Bravo! This is a FAV. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 3:09:00 PM

    So beautiful and so dreamy beloved poet. Its enchanting in every line.

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 2:42:00 PM

    Beautiful and delightful Charmaine. I love these writes by you as it allows once imagination to live your words. Happy Christmas to you 'Maltese Maiden' hugs from your Highlander Poet xx

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 7:44:00 AM

    wow, I love this one too!!! Such beautiful poetry this week!!! (oh, and the captcha spells out WEEK!!)

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 2:34:00 AM

    Gorgeous, your poems truly dazzle the reader's mind, lovely, lovely...

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 12:07:00 AM

    It's beautiful! Harmony of senses accompanied by notes of Viola on a Tuscany sweet field! Charm, thank you for it! :) G.

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 8:36:00 AM

    CHARMAINE... so so passionate, so beautifully written! You are magic with your words of love! So so sweet... love and hugs, Jack XOXOXOX

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 12:50:00 AM

    Some great and well deserved comments. I enjoyed reading this one again.

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 5:13:00 PM

    Hi little one! I'm snowed in and going nuts LOL [possessed? by a pimp?] nice poem, great to hear from you always. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 5:09:00 PM

    B-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l piece, Charmaine! Well orchestrated... well delivered. I love this piece! Great job. Keep 'em up.

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 2:49:00 PM

    What a lovely write my dear poet and I wish u d best in d poetry world. Love and hugs, Based on Belief

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 1:34:00 PM

    So passionate, I had to rewind the imagery to fully indulge... Nectar wording!

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 5:15:00 AM

    wow head over heals beautifully drawn top shelf beautifully penned dazzling piece

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 11:39:00 PM

    A deliciously passionate piece.

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 9:13:00 PM

    Very romantic write with pleasing images, Charma

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 8:57:00 PM

    Ps., Dats All Folks In A Nut Shell! *:*(*

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 8:42:00 PM

    † I Guess We Are Somewhat Centre Stage So To Speak *.* My Father Wouldn't Have It Any Other Way (* Nor Would We Yes, "HIS CHILDREN." ˜ Peering Intently From A Distance, At Perhaps This Waiting Cross ? Smile, Not my Will But YOUR Will Be Done ˜ My Own Sincere Advice Would Be This, Make 'No' Mistake, Else, Your Eternity Awaits ˜ Merry Christ'Mas ˜ Love John

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 5:49:00 PM

    Hi Charnain, Such a lovely and romantic write.. Ken

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 5:40:00 PM

    AY YA YAAAAA CHARMA!! Girl go take a shower because that's where I'm going now! LOLOL Amazing Charma! To my favs OMGoodness