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Soup in turmoil

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Below is the poem entitled Soup in turmoil which was written by poet Joseph May. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Soup in turmoil

The soup is in turmoil
 As emotions begin to boil
   And  poems are running wild too
 But they have been captured and put in a zoo

  To retrieve your poem from out of its cage
Click on a button on the right poetry page
The rules have been set for all to understand
  If you fail to follow them you may be banned 

Many might suffer for the actions of a few
Perhaps it's not the poems that  should be in the zoo

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  1. Date: 12/21/2013 2:47:00 AM
    Life's a hurricane, PoetrySoup its peaceful eye. Those with one leg in and one leg out get sucked way by and by.

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 5:47:00 PM
    Hey Joseph..cute poem....glad I don't know what's going on....ignorance IS bliss...have a great day...

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 12:51:00 AM
    hahaha, This is wonderful, my friend. I hope Chris gets to see it!!!

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 9:53:00 PM
    Clever write, Joseph! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 1:47:00 PM
    - "Storm soup" ....... "rebellion soup" ....hmmm .... it tastes better than "Wait soup" - Have a enjoyable weekend Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 12/13/2013 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Anne...have a great weekend
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 9:06:00 AM
    Love your explanation; though the last line is concerning.

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 12/13/2013 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I agree that it can be abused and misused, perhaps there should be a couple warnings before any action is taken. or it could be done on a case by case basis, depending on the severity of the violation..
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/13/2013 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting me :) But it wasn't your poem; just the info you educated me on. I need to look into these new "banning" rules. Those can be misused on occasion.
    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 12/13/2013 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks FJ...
    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 12/13/2013 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry