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  1. Date: 12/17/2013 8:34:00 AM
    Creative and as beautiful as you are.

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 5:14:00 PM
    witty woman you are for someone who is quite soulful.. i like how you treated thism vie... just lovely.. congrats on your recent wins!,.. huggs

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 2:11:00 PM
    I see you are versed in humor as well. My favorite line was in the third couplet lol, but the devil made me say that. I think I have that look perfected though. I enjoyed the ultimate message in this, which, to me, is in the closing. Great work

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 5:35:00 PM
    Great one and actually a fine Christmas message Dan likes it TOO! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 4:31:00 PM
    Oh...... You captured it all so well! The TV with repetitive commercials is so annoying. All this from just 1 quote? Perfect! :o) XxXx...

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 3:56:00 PM
    beautiful indeed, my friend

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 2:46:00 PM
    excellent poem Vienna Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 11:15:00 AM
    So wonderful Rose. Oh how you capture the deception in those ads, but wait we'll send you another for free (just pay postage and handling). Ring me church bells. (free) love,\ Kathy

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 1:22:00 AM
    this is so full of great ideas all from that one quote you got this poem. Awesome, Vie.

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 6:23:00 PM
    This is a beautiful and enlightening write my friend! I truly loved reading this tremendous poem Rose! What a lovely piece, such a glorious poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 4:57:00 PM
    Really loved this poem. I hate the TV, but I love the peace you write about. Greeat write, Rose....peter

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 12:13:00 PM
    :))) LOVE IT !!!!