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  1. Date: 3/4/2015 5:59:00 PM
    A darling re-write, so lovable like older children would latch onto, maybe even teens. Hard to write for that age group. If she really took in all the portage, she likely would be in the john. But I like it anyway; it adds to the chaos in the piece.

  1. Date: 1/2/2015 10:31:00 PM
    Jon, where are you? I sure do miss you!! Please come back

  1. Date: 4/5/2014 11:39:00 PM
    I love this. I just read it to my 7 yr old grand daughter. thumbs up all the way ;) I have a few like this ;)

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 2:48:00 PM
    lol, now this is so much better than the fairytales I heard at school!!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 1/29/2014 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 10:23:00 AM
    Jon, you deserve a bear hug for this!! lol my best, chuck

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/14/2013 10:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. Not from a bear though I hope.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 12:39:00 AM
    hahaha, GREAT way to revise it!!!! I sure enjoyed this.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/15/2013 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea. I think the Red riding hood should be out of this nursery rhyme for good now.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 10:13:00 PM
    This is cute, Jon! I enjoyed the read! Love, Kim

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/13/2013 10:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. I wish I could remember what I ate that inspired this
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 4:15:00 PM
    That is a new and funnier rendition of the story, made me smile, Jon, well done....peter

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/13/2013 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. I have no idea how I came up with this. It must have been something I ate.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 8:39:00 AM
    Jon A very evil and violent re-write of this classic tale. What happened to the cute and fun ones. Is someone possessing my sweet and kind friend. LOL Nice job Hugs

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/13/2013 10:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's it! I must have had some devils food cake before writing this poem.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 4:39:00 AM
    - A new twist ..... not recommended for young children :)))) - Well done, Jon ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/13/2013 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Indeed! Not recommended for children.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 12:56:00 AM
    Very flowing humor write, Jon

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/13/2013 10:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Dr Ram