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Smooth

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Smooth

She listened to his story
As he spoke accented words
She couldn't help but follow
Others said she was absurd

Much smoother than chocolate
Honey dripped from his lips
A tingle in her bossom
He brought fire to her hips

When he asked her for money
He said it would be okay
It would be temporary
Just a loan he would repay

From out of her pocket book
In his hand she placed a check
He said "Thank you, my darling."
As he kissed her on her neck

Up to her room he followed
Expertly removed her clothes
She writhed upon his body
As inside of her he rose

All that she had imagined
Was experienced that night
She was not disappointed
With her legs she grasped him tight

Exhausted she lay sleeping
As he quickly slipped away
Heading off to cash her check
He had felt he earned his pay

In the morning when she rose
There was a smile on her face
By the time the check had bounced
She'd be gone without a trace



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  1. Date: 5/5/2014 9:43:00 AM
    Hi Richard, I Loved this one as always, you just pull everyone In with your gentle flowing words, a laugh, a giggle, feeling a little hot, then feeling sad for the lady, but wait, this Is Rishard, the punchline, I was suckered all the way through my friend. You always seem to get a wonderful flow In everything you write. Your visions are always pulsating with there own inner life. You my friend are a true craftsman, Loved It. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/5/2014 9:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I had fun with this one. If you have a chance read my current poem you might enjoy that one as well.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 11:32:00 AM
    Like a stick of warm butter!!! Yup. Now, I want butter popcorn...yum! Hell of an ending sir! Reality strikes again...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/5/2014 9:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Belated thanks, somehow I missed this one. I hope all is well with you Dreake.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 6:58:00 AM
    Lol...oh my this was indeed mighty smoothe Rick my friend! Loved this lil' gem for sure..;)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/13/2013 7:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mary Jo
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 4:10:00 AM
    Smooth, indeed:)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/13/2013 6:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ;0)
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 9:38:00 PM
    Ha Ha! Love it! Such a cute poem! You know what I thought was going to happen...but... She got him! Ha! Very funny poem, my dear Richard. Merry Christmas to you and your family. love and hugs, Catie :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/12/2013 10:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thought I should turn the tables, the hunter became the hunted.
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:03:00 PM
    ha! smooth indeed! great poem...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/12/2013 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ilene.
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 6:53:00 PM
    Looks like the smooth was outfoxed by the smoother here Rick, A slick smooth write too. Still catching up. Take care, Richard

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/12/2013 10:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm behind as well. Visiting family and friends in Ontario. Still try to come here and satisfy my addiction for soup.
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 5:48:00 PM
    Outstanding Richard! Great ending!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/12/2013 10:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph I had fun writing this one,
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 4:20:00 PM
    Ummmmmmmmmmmmm.............yes. I'm speechless.....Smooth, indeed. Please change TOO to TO last line second stanza.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/12/2013 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! I changed.