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Below is the poem entitled pretending which was written by poet Shanity Rain. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Visions of old 
   Visions of new
coming silently
   begging through

Greed and power
   betrayal strong
refusing rejection
  motives wrong

unseen spirit 
  sends whispers
answers for hatred 
  lies within a narcissistic face

changing many profiles , going unnoticed, resenting , pretending.


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  1. Date: 12/13/2013 5:43:00 AM
    very beautifully drawn piece

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 12/13/2013 8:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    why thank-you my well spoken Irishman friend .
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 12:45:00 PM
    - Really well written Shanity !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 12/12/2013 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you Baby Doll ! A vision of powers that be.