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              a break in the clouds...in a birdbath, moonlight skates on thin ice





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Monoku Contest: Sponsored by Broken Wings
12/11/13

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  1. Date: 3/11/2014 3:07:00 PM

    visual expression at its best! // congrats on win. // paul

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 1:02:00 AM

    The poem Yoda has spoken.. The hush of awe overwhelms the room! Congrats!!

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:10:00 PM

    this paints a lovely picture, carrie, I love "moonlight skates on thin ice" - congrats on your 1st place win :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:02:00 PM

    Wow, my personal favorite so far. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:59:00 PM

    wowowowow. AMAZING, and congrats.

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:41:00 PM

    - One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Carrie ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:17:00 PM

    Wow!!! Way to go ...SK

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 2:47:00 PM

    Congratulations on first place in my contest, sorry for the long delay in judging, I have been having some eyesight problems. Constance

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 2:33:00 AM

    Very nice monoku! :) 7 G.

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 1:03:00 AM

    You are amazing, Carrie, even in this small one line poem!

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 5:47:00 PM

    A very clever and visual piece. well done. best wishes. Peter Dome.

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 12:24:00 PM

    Utterly beautiful! Picturing this makes me smile.

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 7:31:00 AM

    Creative work..I got a chuckle..If I were skating on thin ice it would be more falling than skating..Ha! Ha!!..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara