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  1. Date: 4/1/2014 4:10:00 PM

    This is wonderful FJ. Congratulations on the win

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 4/2/2014 6:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Morning Tim :) Thank you.
  1. Date: 4/1/2014 12:53:00 PM

    Certainly a colorful poem. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 4/1/2014 12:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for passing through Joyce; and thanks for the congrats :)
  1. Date: 4/1/2014 12:45:00 PM

    Lovely... Congratulations on your grandest win, F.J.!!! ^_^ this is fabulous poem,, :O))

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 4/1/2014 12:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Lady; thank you!
  1. Date: 4/1/2014 11:34:00 AM

    Congrats on a great win FJ

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 4/1/2014 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joseph :)
  1. Date: 4/1/2014 2:21:00 AM

    Love it congratulations FJ xx

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 4/1/2014 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mandy HI!! :) Thanks Lady.
  1. Date: 4/1/2014 1:46:00 AM

    Wonderful take on the green theme, congrats on the fine win, FJ

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 4/1/2014 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you again Ram.
  1. Date: 4/1/2014 12:56:00 AM

    Your piece flows with elegance and beauty. Wonderful write and applause to you F.J. ^_^ <3 <3 <3

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 4/1/2014 6:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hiya Teddy. Thank you!
  1. Date: 3/31/2014 11:31:00 PM

    Lovely FJ....Congrats, girl!!!! Awesome in every way...

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 4/1/2014 6:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Eilee! :D
  1. Date: 3/31/2014 11:28:00 PM

    And I CERTAINLY cannot ignore this Emerald's song that you have so eloquently sung to my heart and soul. Hand's down first place no contest....

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 4/1/2014 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well hey there Mr!! :) thanks Tim.
  1. Date: 3/31/2014 9:47:00 PM

    Beautiful but you do know the winner has to buy everyone in Ireland a pint of Guinness? Lol

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 4/1/2014 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...remind me to start writing poorer -.- lol you're such a nut ;)
  1. Date: 3/31/2014 9:29:00 PM

    One word for you... AWESOME..... LINDA

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 4/1/2014 6:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What a wonderful thing to see first thing in the morning =) Thanks so much Linda.
  1. Date: 12/31/2013 5:09:00 AM

    Such a soothing song,,,,lets drench in the colours;)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/31/2013 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol. I do love colors Vandana; I could never have a favorite ;)
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 2:07:00 AM

    Beautiful!!!! I love this poem, FJ!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/13/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Happy your soaring through my imagination with me. Thank you beautiful Bindu Vijayan
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 2:16:00 PM

    in green shades painted beautifully

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/12/2013 2:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thank you Liam.
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 11:36:00 AM

    Loved this, particularly the second stanza. Neutrality of the genders is an exalted view with which many struggle. I can resolve it into neutrality through characterizing it as a spectrum--a continuous array of varying hues and shades, encompassing all. One cannot say that yellow is more important than blue or better than orange.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/12/2013 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I agree with your beautifully colorful comment Mark ;) Thank you for reading it.
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 8:46:00 AM

    Hey. :) Beautiful poem here. I enjoyed reading. Love the closing to the piece. It has much rhythm and serenity. Always, Laura

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/12/2013 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Laura; it was actually a soothing piece to write since I had to sit quietly and step outside of myself so-to-speak.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 6:45:00 PM

    I think you captured the theme very well.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/11/2013 10:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    She is wonderful, we wrote a poem together called White Butterflies.
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/11/2013 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard. It was such a brilliant concept Monterey Sirak came up with. I couldn't pass it up.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 5:53:00 PM

    We WILL miss you FJ... you write so beautifully! This is an excellent example, my dear dear friend! Love you XOXOXOXOX

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/11/2013 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm glad you liked it! Don't know why I picked green...guess it spoke to me ;)