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My Turn will Come

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My Turn will Come

A battle with myself
I am still on the shelf
What do I do to be seen

Is it my none red lips
Is it I have no hips
Why are they always so mean

Sitting here patiently
None seem to notice me
I want to feel like a queen

Stand tall I admonish
You really are a dish
You could be on the big screen

My turn will come I know
To be dressed and on show
In my best dress of dark green

With all the trimmings round
I look good and astound
Topped with red beads I preen

Just hold me gentle please
You must never me squeeze
My holly leaves prick quite keen.

GG 12/11/2013 
Contest entry. Contest sponsored by Dr Ram

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  1. Date: 10/16/2014 9:36:00 AM
    Oh this is so potent,

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 7:00:00 AM
    Hi Mandy, I enjoyed reading your poem. I can very much relate. I want to thank you as well for the congrats.. :-)

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 3:58:00 PM
    Mandy very good write and I like the format you chose… unusual….David

  1. Date: 12/26/2013 5:05:00 AM
    you truly capture one's imagination, your words strike hard,yes with poetry like this, Your turn will certainly come...

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 8:14:00 PM
    Congratulations Mandy. Lovely write!

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 9:46:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 12:35:00 AM
    Beautiful and clever poem! Yes, you are a Queen, I am sure of it! Congrats on it, and I wish you good luck in the contest. 7 G.

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Great result here Mandy, warm wishes for this and future ones to come, Joe..)

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 8:29:00 AM
    This is so much fun, I am sure you were a vision. Congrats.

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 6:04:00 AM
    congrats on a great win Mandy..

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 3:57:00 AM
    Excellent poem Mandy.I love reading this.Congratulations.(: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 7:51:00 PM
    Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, Mandy

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 3:58:00 PM
    love this one, Mandy, so clever. Hope this will be a big winner. How are you? I hope you're feeling much better now xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 12:47:00 AM
    hey this is GREAT personification and you also used that form of Dr. Ram's. EXTRA points for YOu.

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 11:01:00 PM
    I see what is missing. It is the mistletoe. Her turn will come under the mistletoe.

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 10:01:00 AM
    A good doctor and thanks for ur wonderful comments u all are what keeps me going in this poetic world. Love, Based On Belief

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 7:22:00 AM
    Poor Ms Holly!! lol. Very clever and witty write, Mandy. You're sure to score in the contest with this smoothie. Good luck, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 3:13:00 AM
    A great write mandy, could well be the winner. Well done....peter

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:09:00 AM
    Great topic for the contest..Reads like a winner to me.I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 5:19:00 PM
    Mandy, reading about Ms. Holly made me jolly!! Good writing! chuck

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