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Chicken Cot UFO

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Chicken Cot UFO

Chicken Cot UFO

It crossed the gloaming skies above the roofs,
in awe we followed then, its jazzy course;
mysterious would be the incensed spoofs
this ireful ship, upon us, would enforce.

Hmm..
..We said! Abominable was the ship
that traced its gaudy eights in air with hum;
predestined to avenge our ego trip,
atrocious poulets, would not succumb.

The chicken soldiers were a frightful troop
in pink-pistachio uniforms with spots,
that insolent, bombarded us with moop,
to hit our heads that were devoid of thoughts.

In order to placate the chicken troop,
some started to recite their verse to skies;
confronting that attacking chicken group,
- bird poems they opposed to battle cries.

The angry war-birds listened to the verse,
that was composed by stunned, exposed confreres,
their cackle was bemocking and adverse,
- upon their heads they wore rouge voluperes.

This myth reflected what would happen if
extraterrestrial cots invaded Earth,
relentless chicken-birds in martial tiff
would moop upon some artists of top worth.

© 12/11/2013, G. Venetopoulos

moop = Matter Out Of Place

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  1. Date: 12/29/2013 10:37:00 AM
    What a funny image! [The chicken soldiers were a frightful troop/in pink-pistachio uniforms with spots,] It made me smile. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 6:28:00 AM
    Congrats, Giorgio! This had made me smile too... Cute, very!!

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 4:12:00 AM
    Enjoyed your poem and congratulations on the fine win,Giorgio

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 8:50:00 PM
    Giorgio, this one was a top smilERRRR:) , CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SMILE contest. :) Wishing you a Warm And Heartfelt New Year. Take care.... LINDA

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 3:08:00 AM
    A very creative write, lovely:)

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 2:24:00 PM
    Amusingly and creatively spun. I bet you enjoyed writing but maybe not as much as I enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 2:22:00 PM
    I find this poem funny..and clever .. Have a great new week ahead : )

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 9:11:00 AM
    Crazy. I enjoyed ring this fun poem. Hugs.

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 9:23:00 PM
    the clever title of this one drew me in. I like this one, with such fun creativity shown.

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 6:34:00 AM
    lol. If they only target the top poets I'll be safe. I suggest you don full armor, my friend. Great fun, G. Hugs, Licia :-)

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/14/2013 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am actually vested like Leonidas on the film 300! The War-Chicken will like my posture and target elsewhere. :) G.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 3:07:00 AM
    A truly great write Giorgio. Gave me my smile for the day.....Peter

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/14/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am smiling, too Peter! Thank you!
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 2:04:00 AM
    Thanks for explaination. But we both know it's impossible but I know two people who swear they've seen the real thing.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/12/2013 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hmm... Ok!
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 12:46:00 PM
    Aristotle meets Albert Brooks! Stellar fun! Giorgio I loved it and again, you Sir are the 5 Star General of poetry! chuck

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/12/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Chuck! I have fun reading it, too.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 5:51:00 AM
    Imagine, who writes like this! This is so funny! What a sight to watch that 'll be and all that wrath on poets!? :))

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/11/2013 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I was among them, if you noticed! :)
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 5:43:00 AM
    I'm smiling as I read this...

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 4:04:00 AM
    crisp language graces this page, G.. i love this kind of poetry from you--- in terms of simple but striking words and flow.. charmed by the warbirds!... huggs

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 12/11/2013 4:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! I lol, too!