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  1. Date: 10/17/2014 7:08:00 PM
    Oh to see your younger self again... I really do enjoy your nostalgic pieces. You do them the best... maybe cause you're still a child deep down? "That time... and this. Not empty... just passed" << what a poignant and accurate description of the passage of time. Love this!

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 3:43:00 PM
    Wonderful mind pictures you draw Caleb, what is making it less is the way you are laying out the lines because you are trying too hard to make it look like poetry IT IS POETRY, PROSE POETRY ... you can write in paragraphs, I say we do a haibun, start with something like this from the past that feels country & send it to me & I'll add a haiku & I'll continue the tale some how & you'll add a haiku .. okies you start! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 6:39:00 PM
    This one gave me goosebumps..Somehow reminds of my youth.I still love to.jump though not from certain heights now ..cause I had a slipdisc ..and few years ago I even broke my little toe when I jumped from our boat and landed on a rock .I could feel the excitement of your backflip through your verse Cal.Awesome..and tnks for stopping by : )

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 10:16:00 PM
    A touching and powerfully expressed verse. Very much enjoyed reading. : ) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 4:45:00 AM
    This is quite introspective, written with emotions of that day and still continue with it, Caleb. enjoyed a good sentimental poem after so many days.

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 7:04:00 PM
    You are touched by Gods own hand...lil bro...and you don't take it for granted...:-) :-) Soup mail...for that recipe..:-)

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 4:20:00 PM
    This is so priceless Caleb, I think I've just seen the introspective side of you, and it is very sentimental and moving, I believe that little boy is still inside of you, safe in the knowledge that he has grown into an intelligent sensitive and nature oriented man, you have been blessed, by the One, who splayed the sun in your eyes, blessed be 3x3 xxx

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 3:11:00 PM
    this is an amazing poem, Caleb. Of the poets I know on Soup, you are among my top ten. Outstanding work!! Please keep it up!!