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This Perfect Christmas Gift

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This Perfect Christmas Gift

It’s been a decade, even more,
Since I had one long rest,
When I could happily relax
Forgetting that I’m stressed.

I want a cruise, an awesome cruise
On a luxury ship
Down South America’s warm coast
And then around its tip!

In fact, I’d travel all the world
While taking my sweet time,
But such a thing I’d need to do
On someone else’s dime!!

This perfect Christmas gift, however,
I may never get. . . 
I’ll keep on dreaming of it, though,
Because I’m not dead yet!

For The Perfect Christmas Gift Contest of Deb Wilson

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  1. Date: 5/27/2014 8:23:00 AM
    Hi Andrea, firstly, congratulations on your win, although belated. You never know what life holds for you, one day your dream may become a reality. Another golden write from your pen. A well crafted, fun write. I do hope you get your wish. I enjoyed this peace. It had a very good flow. You let your dream sing my friend. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Wow Andrea, this is wonderfully written. I enjoyed it. Congrats on your win...Hugs...Roger

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 8:46:00 AM
    Enjoyed your poem on Christmas Gift and congrats on your win in the contest, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 4:51:00 PM
    Here's hoping your wish come's true. And maybe I can take one when your through. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 12/22/2013 8:28:00 PM
    I'd like a Christmas gift like that as well , or the lottery would be very nice too!

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 4:01:00 AM
    Andrea I too like to go cruising to Andaman and Nicobar islands.I strongly believe this will happen.Wishing your Perfect Gift to materialise. (: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 2:40:00 PM
    I say set a date to go and book a cruise for a week, life is so short. Would be great to go as a group, maybe get a deal, good way for all us poets to possibly meet? Lovely dream and write! Hugs

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 1:26:00 PM
    I have the solution. Why not catch a ride on Santa's sleigh. All you need take is some sugar for the reindeer and a bottle of whiskey for Santa. He'll take you, joyfully, around the world. Hope you get your fondest desire and soon. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 3:45:00 PM
    lol, so true - where there's life there's hope and you never know!!

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 12:47:00 PM
    What a nice Christmas gift you have dreamed Andrea in this sweet lovely writes. One can imagine the joy your lovely journey would impart and fill you with. Beautiful write my friend. Nothing new. Have a nice time. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 7:45:00 AM
    Now that sounds fantastic! Can I add to it? The soup poets all chip in, charter a ship and cruise off into the sunset writing glorious poetry!

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 7:06:00 AM
    Andrea I think we would all like this gift. I will buy a lottery ticket ,about the only way for me to enjoy a wish like this. A great wish poem.Anne

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 4:23:00 AM
    That would be a pretty good Christmas gift I must agree. I hope you get it, even if it's not for Christmas. I'm sure the rest would be appreciated at any time. Good work, and good luck with the contest, although you really don't need luck.

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 4:54:00 PM
    Maybe some day it will get that dream gift..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for stopping by..I made a correction on my poem "The Animals" which will help to explain that part of the poem..Sara

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 4:33:00 AM
    This is a perfect poem about what would be your perfect gift! I know what you mean, it would be nice, but someone else is going to have to pay for it...I can't afford it either my friend! This is a tremendous write Andrea, it flowed extremely well and you drew me into the piece with ease! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 1:11:00 AM
    No not yet dear..but im checking my letter box : ) : )..I let you know when i d0 hugs: )

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 12:12:00 AM
    Sometimes dreams come true

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 11:26:00 PM
    Hi Andrea, I'm here enjoying your writing! Hope your dream comes true... you deserve! Love always, gautami

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 9:26:00 PM
    Hoping you get that perfect Christmas gift...and soon....and betting this is a big winner!

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 4:41:00 PM
    I hope your wish comes true, sooner, rather than later! This was a fun poem to read, and I think we can all relate to wanting something that we may never get! Nice work, Andrea! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, as always!

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