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  1. Date: 5/24/2015 8:48:00 PM
    Craig.. Your words paint a mesmerizing picture of a doting, protective mom, this was truly a winning write.. I See why Thomas choose your work, many congrats!

  1. Date: 5/24/2015 3:21:00 PM
    Craig, Conrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA

  1. Date: 5/22/2015 6:06:00 PM
    seeing this beauty again on a winner list. So well deserved, Craig.

  1. Date: 5/22/2015 8:13:00 AM
    Wow Congs, i love this poem, Yayi, I enjoyed reading it

  1. Date: 5/21/2015 7:07:00 PM
    Craig, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*

  1. Date: 5/21/2015 1:52:00 PM
    beautifully penned Craig i love the fact you wrote this from the mother's perspective:-) congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 11:05:00 AM
    I'm blown away Craig! Who knew shallow waters run this deep?

  1. Date: 3/9/2014 5:35:00 PM
    Lovely poem, Craig, you capture a mother's perspective well

  1. Date: 2/27/2014 11:14:00 PM
    So sweet how you put yourself into the character of a mother here. I really enjoyed reading this one, Craig. Congratulations. I am finally seeing some of the winners of this contest!!

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 8:43:00 PM
    http://www.stephaniedeshpande.com/contemporary-free-rhyme-poetry-contest/ WAHOOOOO! Here you go, chum, a link to Stephanie Deshpande's blog on the winners... a link to this poem is now on her site. What a journey this has been. Such a wondrous meeting of visual and written art. I have gone from tizzy to out and out giddy! Hugs!

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 7:44:00 PM
    You really got inside the mother and child dynamic! Throughly enjoyed! Congrad's on your win. Light & love

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 2:07:00 PM
    Craig.. craig!!! CRAIG! First, congrats.. I'm in a wonderful tizzy. STEPHANIE DESPANDE HERSELF will be reading the winners! She would like to feature the winners on HER WEBSITE... she was thrilled to have inspired poetry and she is a poet herself!!! She just joined soup and you may see her today! I am floating, turning mental cartwheels... I suspect this may be her favourite.. did you know the subject you were writing about IS the artists DAUGHTER? Ha. Great stuff you wrote.. I can't calm down.

    Cornish Avatar Craig Cornish
    Date: 2/11/2014 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Really! You deserve to be in a tizzy (what a happy word that is seldom used but everyone knows what it means!) From day one when I came here I said to myself, "This lady is special". So, like the kid in Good Will Hunting, I fear and bless the day when you may go on to bigger things! I definitely had a feeling it was either her child or her inner self as a child--amazingly emotive art either way! Thank you Cyndi and welcome Stephanie!!
  1. Date: 2/11/2014 11:04:00 AM
    Great write and win Craig...congrats

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 2:49:00 PM
    This one really spoke to me, Craig. The depths of my love for my daughter go farther than even I realize, I think. I'd like to have her with me at all times to protect her, and God help anyone who would try to hurt her. Love this poem!!!!

    Cornish Avatar Craig Cornish
    Date: 12/16/2013 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's a good thing, I could tell the protective parents when I picked a girl up on a date!! Couldn't you!!
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 12:04:00 PM
    Awwwww.....so sweet. I read this before but came back to post a comment....AND to say....this avatar????? Oh me oh my.....I've told you that before...I know, but had to say it again!!!!

    Cornish Avatar Craig Cornish
    Date: 12/11/2013 1:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Eileen thanks hon!!
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 11:42:00 AM
    Craig, I am blown away! This portrays a father's love from depths within your soul! overwhelming! chuck

    Cornish Avatar Craig Cornish
    Date: 12/11/2013 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Chuck
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 6:31:00 PM
    I can't help but wonder what inspired this poem, but I know so well the feeling of wanting to protect a child, almost to the point of slipping myself into their skin, just so that I can keep them from harm. The feeling is so intense....and yet, we cannot always shield them as much as we would like. You know that better than most, as do I.....but of the dream, and the intensity of the desire. ...we have no control

    Cornish Avatar Craig Cornish
    Date: 12/11/2013 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Carrie, I was inspired by Cyndi's contest and the painting of the sleeping girl and tried to write it from a mother's point of view, hence the womb reference---and yes we do know Carrie--God Bless! and thank you
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 6:17:00 PM
    We are so connected to our child that sometimes it feels like we are one and the same. Sadly there are places beyond our protective grasp and we must allow them to venture on their own.This is a parents painful reality. Fortunately they are stronger than we realize because they have collected a reserve of our strength.

    Cornish Avatar Craig Cornish
    Date: 12/11/2013 12:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Richard--you're so right
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 12:36:00 PM
    I felt a father's protective love and wanting to let her live her own life too here...beautiful Craig...

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 9:02:00 AM
    This is very well-written free verse from you, Craig -- succinct, with some intriguing line breaks. I don't agree with Debbie on this one(which is totally kosher). The overall effect wouldn't be as strong(for me at least)if you spelled-out too many details. Much of this poem's charm obviously comes from the reader filling in possible scenarios as the stanzas move along.

    Cornish Avatar Craig Cornish
    Date: 12/9/2013 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Chris--from a talented free verser like you it is high praise.BTW, I forwarded your Love Poem - 29 to my nephew who is recovering from some issues and he loved it as I do.
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