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Kiss the Rain

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Kiss the Rain

Kiss the Rain 

By: Tyner Twine 

'A ballad I wrote based on the Piano Music By: Yiruma'.
Dedicated to the man I used to know

As I take a glimpse
On the endless sea
I felt the oceans
Between you and me

Our fates never crossed
Our love was lost
Through the tides and waves
Of our destiny 

The day you swore to be
Forever with me
Was also the day 
That you've left me be

To be by the side
Of another bride
And I am left with pain
As I kiss the rain

And so tonight,
I’ll cry to sleep
Hoping dearly that someday you 
Will come back to me

But dreams aren't true
I clearly knew, 
That today
I have just lost my most important ‘you.’

(Instrumental)

((You and I both knew we could never fight it, that we could never evade it, 
that we could change…But I know that amidst the smile you hide your pain…
the pain that I can’t ever share from now on…because I have lost you…
and you have lost me.))

As the waves grew
And we drift apart
Please meet my eyes
To say your goodbye

But you looked away
And left all the pain
Deep in my heart
As I kiss the rain

And so tonight, 
I cried to sleep
And hoped someday that you
Will come back to me

But dreams aren't true
I clearly knew,
That tonight,
There will be no love from ‘me and you’

So love, I’ll say goodbye,
And hide the tears to cry
Your fake smile will haunt me down
Until I die

For we have loved so true
And lost ‘me and you,’
Left with scars and clouds,
And tears from heaven

As I feel the rain,
Wash down all the pain,
Our dreams reached out 
And died in vain

Please stay by my side,
Hold me through the nights,
As we fight in vain,
As we kiss the rain.

Yet why am I alone in the rain?

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  1. Date: 12/23/2013 5:44:00 PM
    This is the second poem from you ive read and i do believe there will be many more. A wonderful but sad tale Kristine, i hope that time has healed you, blessings Carl

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 1:46:00 PM
    Hello Kristine, I really enjoyed reading this poem. a well written poem....Hugs...Roger

    Ursua Avatar Kristine Mariz Ursua
    Date: 12/19/2013 7:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you (Maraming Salamat!)
  1. Date: 12/19/2013 1:31:00 PM
    Hi Kristine, congratulations, with this awesome #1... I want you to know how this one was my favorite out of all the number one poems, on my ballad contest winning list. xox..LInda

    Ursua Avatar Kristine Mariz Ursua
    Date: 12/19/2013 7:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    wow... um.. i don't know what to say.... Thank you! Maraming Salamat!!!! <3
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 12:08:00 AM
    You have written a woeful heartbreak poem of love lost that flows quite nicely and is enjoyable to read. I did not think that the Instrumental section added anything to a good write. We want to see more from you.

    Ursua Avatar Kristine Mariz Ursua
    Date: 12/9/2013 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Maraming Salamat, sir Donald :) your words are very motivating :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 11:30:00 PM
    So is dis personal? I say u wrote a splendid jilted lover's poem so soulful and winsome ah i was like gah yor ex must b writhing. Kudos for d fine refrain n rhymin too. I admired yor sea based metaphor as well. Pls review my latest poem too.

    Ursua Avatar Kristine Mariz Ursua
    Date: 12/9/2013 12:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, it was VERY personal. Maraming Salamat for reviewing!
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 6:49:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your verse this evening. Light & Love

    Ursua Avatar Kristine Mariz Ursua
    Date: 12/8/2013 9:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, Ms. Debbie! :)