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- Give Me The Eternity -

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- Give Me The Eternity -



          The longing for a deep red ruby
          creeps like an ivy in my heart
          Love me today - love me tomorrow
          Sparks sensors from a sensitive heart
          Give me the eternity
          Like a lost child you take my hand
          Heart demons in angels inner circle
          brought me into beautiful golden moonlight
          Take me with you ... in perfection ... the divinity
          Hot bodies close together
          The silence encourager ... weak breath
          A deep red ruby is perfect - a beauty
          The eternity - how long is that





07.12.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 1/11/2014 6:27:00 PM
    Hi Anne-Lise, another gentle slice of Love from your pen. Love, the eternal dream, told in beautiful words from a beautiful heart, who could ask for more. A canvass painted with Love's colours. After this write eternity is yours my friend. Softly, the words you write float on air and seep oh so siftly into the heart. What beautiful images appear in the mind. An excellent write. I enjoyed the read. Enjoy your Sunday. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/12/2014 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Mike - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/26/2013 6:49:00 AM
    AY YAAAAAA Anne Lise this is a ruby red piece itself lol. Beautiful!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/26/2013 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :)))
    Thomas IV Avatar C. Thomas IV
    Date: 12/26/2013 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh, this is FJ Thomas (Flo); needed an adult acct for poems I am not ready for my daughter to see just yet ;)
  1. Date: 12/22/2013 4:17:00 AM
    It seems with this one, eternity is something or someone near yet so far. It's like a dream, yet certainly a possibility anytime or beyond mortality. May you find it my friend, and cherish it. Love, Wendy

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/22/2013 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Wendy - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 7:47:00 PM
    Beautiful. I love this it makes me want love and is so cute<3

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/21/2013 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Taylor - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Beautiful and touching poem!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/12/2013 10:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Vesna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 6:40:00 AM
    7 stars Anne-Lise You are Poetry!! One off topic question, Where's Becca Lucas?

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/12/2013 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ... I do not know where Becca are........... - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 7:38:00 AM
    Romantic and beautiful. Your words are perfection.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/11/2013 10:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/10/2013 11:27:00 PM
    Brilliant work, Anne-Lise!!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/11/2013 3:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Bindu. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/10/2013 2:58:00 PM
    very romantic. and I love the ending question: how long is that. If you ever stop to consider eternity, it is mind blowing!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/11/2013 3:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/10/2013 2:21:00 PM
    Very steamy, Anne!...and kind of dreamy, too...Well done!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/11/2013 3:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Caleb. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 2:13:00 PM
    Passionate work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit with congrats..Sara

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/9/2013 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 8:06:00 PM
    Anne Lise this is such a sweet poem...the take me with you..in perfection....what a dreamy line!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/9/2013 2:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Donna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 4:23:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this heartfelt work of yours. Well done.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/9/2013 2:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, A.O. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 1:02:00 PM
    Pure passion

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2013 1:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Cinzia. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 11:25:00 AM
    wonderful write Anne...thank you for stopping by....hugs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2013 11:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 8:40:00 AM
    A lovely poem depicting the heart of a lovely Anne Lise. Continue to shower your readers with love. Love is a very powerful too that can reach beyond the imaginary line and bring peace to the heart mind body and soul. Nice love verse.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2013 8:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Christine. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 8:39:00 AM
    A very beautiful and romantic poem well crafted by your very creative words my dear friend Anne Lise. I'm so glad & my honor to read again tonight one of your stellar writes. Thank you so much! Have a grace-filled weekend to you and your love ones! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2013 8:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Leonora. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 7:30:00 AM
    Lovely work of art Anne Lise. Loved the energy I felt in your poem.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2013 8:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Mustapha. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 7:18:00 AM
    very beautiful picture painted

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2013 8:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 4:50:00 AM
    Lovely romantic write on longing and love, Anne

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2013 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Dr. Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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