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Revelation Or Implantation

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Revelation Or Implantation

Like the speed of light a revelation
came; knowledge entered portals of the brain 
Then the thoughts disappeared what deflation 
A seed planted with light wisdom a gain

Darkness a seed of Satan's devices
Slipped into the brain's portals quietly
When darkness floats in, sits, all pay the price
The body, soul, and spirit dies nightly

An implantation of evil that grows
A darkness that spreads with thick evil wings
The web spreading out 'til emotions enclose
Blackness covers the brain, heart, feelings

At the speed of light, wisdom opens doors
Darkness settles into a being's stores

Name: Giorgio V
Contest:Relate Poem To Quote
Poet: Sara Kendrick
Written over several days in December 2013
Quote:"Everybody talks about the speed of light,
but what is the speed of darkness?" Anonymous

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  1. Date: 12/27/2013 9:55:00 PM
    Once darkness overtakes us, it is sometimes difficult to overcome it. Yet, with wise choices we can achieve anything. I like the message in this poem. Very good work, Sara! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats and well wishes. I hope you had a great Christmas, and I wish you all the best for the New Year!

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 4:26:00 AM
    Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, sara

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 6:58:00 PM
    Congratulations Sara....much deserved nice winning spot...hope all is well....

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 4:43:00 PM
    Wow Sara, this is really a deep poem for me, and also a splendid one, congrats on your win, and wishing you a beautiful day there :D hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 4:19:00 PM
    Sara: Congrats on your beautiful poem and on your great win in my contest "Quotes" Thank you for your participation. :) G.

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 12:14:00 PM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem Sara in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 10:03:00 AM
    wow, you did an amazing job explaining your interpretation of this quote thru sonnet form, Sara. I think he will love this entry.

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 2:10:00 PM
    Darkness..a seed of satans devises..a powerful line Sara...one I totally agree with...this poem is straight to favs...and you in my heart...God bless my friend...

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 6:30:00 PM
    I like the feel of this poem in the making. I also have one I wrote titled; UNTITLED, feel free to check it out if you like. Chris

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 8:52:00 PM
    Am enjoying this write very much Sara..looking forward to reading the completed version a well...very deep introspection..

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 7:05:00 AM
    I guess we all suffer this affliction Sara , I too must write down a thought when it comes to me .Looking forward to reading the finished version.Anne

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 2:05:00 AM
    Should we recall all what crosses our minds, we would be greatest of all creation. I often suffer the same problem. At times, I wake up at night to jot down notes in case the inspiration disappears with the dawn!! Friend, JM

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 12:56:00 AM
    Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 12:07:00 AM
    Yes, I seem to do that myself...the old er I get the worse it is! I forget things, but it isn't anything severe, not yet anyway! My grandparents got pretty bad but never had Alzheimer's , they were tested, they just forgot things because of old age. Just a little worse than normal.I would like to read the rest of this poem, maybe I am way off about this memory lapse in your poem. Let me know when you finish this I would like to read the completed piece! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:15:00 PM
    Nice one Sara. it happens to me all the time.... must be old age lol....Peter

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 3:15:00 PM
    hope to read the full version, sara.. sounds very interesting.. huggs