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  1. Date: 12/12/2013 3:42:00 PM
    Very true huh? Love this little free-verse! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 8:07:00 AM
    Brilliant! I am reminded of the show Romper Room I watched as a young child. The children on the show sang a song about being a bee. Maybe this was why.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 2:20:00 PM
    Like your insight on the bee and we. I wonder if that's were the 'bumble' in bumble bee came from? They're like pug's with wings.

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 4:56:00 AM
    Assonance nicely used with meaningful write on bumble bee, vie

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 1:40:00 AM
    Observation from a Great Poet. Thanks fr sharing. JM

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 10:10:00 AM
    Lovely images of bumble bee. Nature has a lot of miracles. Very best wishes, Linda x

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 8:47:00 AM
    So like the bee, we can do what seems to be the impossible! For like the bee we can do it if we only have complete faith in ourselves that we can! What an awesome message my friend! I really loved reading this splendid poem this morning! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!